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Typos & edit suggestions: @Electromaster
p7 it would be nice if they can get along -> it would be nice if they could get along
p8 many number of ways -> any number of ways
p9 So he's just basically greedy not like it hasn't been known until now -> So he's basically...
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Typos & edit suggestions: @Shikuro1224
p4 one year lost of time -> one year of lost time
p5 then we wouldn't have need this -> then we wouldn't need this // then we wouldn't have needed this
p5 Things will be bad if it stays like this -> Things will be bad if they stay...
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Typos & edit suggestions: @matcharuri
p6 a lil -> a lil'
p8 Like hell, I'll let -> Like hell I'll let
p10 expected result after all -> expected result, after all
p10 Afte careful -> After careful
p10 We wish you, Honma-sama all the best -> We wish you, Honma-sama, all...
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Typos & edit suggestions: @roppatsu
p2 You submit that work in yet? -> You submit that work yet? // You hand that work in yet?
p5 Going up there too much lately lol -> Going up there too much lately lol. // Going up there too much lately, lol.
p7 Tomo-rrow -> Tomor-row...
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Typos & edit suggestions: @anonymousan
p1 library-based paper-tiger -> library-based paper tiger
p2 in front of upperclassmen's classroom -> in front of an upperclassmen's classroom // in front of the upperclassmen's classroom
p2 elder ToXXro, the big antagonist...
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Typos & edit suggestions: @Shikuro1224
p6 romancable -> romanceable
p8 eyes fulled of anticipation -> eyes full of anticipation
p8 It's like he saying -> It's like he's saying
p8 I belived in you -> I believed in you
p9 The premise of this game is to date girls after...
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Edit suggestions: @LazyDust
I'm right front -> I'm right in front
I'm right behind you.. -> I'm right behind you. // I'm right behind you...
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Edit suggestions: @LazyDust
Getting behind the demon queen easily.. -> Getting behind the demon queen so easily...
Or is she the one behind all of this? (-> I didn't understand how this sentence is related to what came before.)
Edit suggestions: @LazyDust
While showering, I feel a presence behind me. -> Whenever I shower, I feel a presence behind me. // When I took a shower, I felt a presence behind me.
I remembered that happened before. -> I remember that happening to me before.