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Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL
p3 Please be of no concern -> Please don't be concerned
p5 that, bomber -> that bomber
p7 Don't Cross at a Red Light -> ["Green Light, Red Light" is actually
p9 follow after her -> chase her
p15 at time like these -> at times like...
You'd think Sumire got scammed, but this supposedly indestructible phone might well get destroyed every time she transforms. In which case that overly generous warranty would be an absolute bargain despite the insane sticker price. How many phones does Sumire need to go through before it's the...
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Typos & edit suggestions: @_Yanagi_
p23 top secret information [...] were stolen -> top secret information [...] was stolen ->
p24 original's story -> original story
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Typo & edit suggestions: @lin_tvdchick
p32 settled things up -> settled things
p34 who died as a villainess -> who had died as a villainess
p34 who died as a villainess, and even though -> who died as a villainess. And even though [<-> run-on sentence]
p35 share...
I appreciate the detailed reply, and I'm perfectly content with your explanation for why these lines shouldn't be changed. That said, please don't feel the need to reply in such depth to my feedback comments. I make a ton of them on scanlated manga chapters I read, in hopes of helping the...
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Typos & edit suggestions: @dexec
p3 Here's an advice. -> Here's my advice.
p4 kills anything be it -> kills anyone, be it
p4 that kills so swift and clean -> that kills so swiftly and cleanly // whose kills are so swift and clean
p6 almost familiar, someone -> almost...
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Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL
p10 the news are on -> the news is on
p11 I got no -> I've got no
p12 kinda feel off -> feel kinda off
p12 just as I expected from -> just as expected from
p15 underestimate them and be sure -> underestimate them and you're sure...
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Typo: @Nosebleed
p26 what happned -> what happened
p35 not even I can't -> not even I can
p35 I come to I'm -> I come to, I'm
p35 to use set up -> to use // to set up
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Typos & edit suggestions: @Waffleidle
p4 getting an extra portions -> getting an extra portion // getting extra portions
p4 Our precious memories!! It's burning! -> Our precious memories!! They're burning!
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Typos & edit suggestions: @MyleneScans
p2 rest home for the day -> rest at home for the day
p2 It's definitely [...] wasn't it -> It was definitely [...] wasn't it [mixed tenses]
p3 Ikezwa -> Ikezawa
p4 Din Dong -> Ding Dong
p7 just in case though -> just in case...