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Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @_Yanagi_ p6 Sir Tesset were under -> Sir Tesset was under p6 let alone be solved -> let alone to be solved / let alone for it to be solved / let alone that it could be solved p7 In all due respect -> With all due respect p15 fiancé, then...

Thanks for the chapter! Edit suggestions: typos, grammar, misc. Chapter title & p2: who's -> whose p10 who's -> whose p18 couldn't bare -> couldn't bear p18 collapse in -> collapse of p19 only in my days off -> only on my days off p27 She ran the 50 meters in seconds. -> She ran the 50 meters...

Thanks for the chapter! Typo & edit suggestions: @roppatsu p16 quite a a rascal -> quite a rascal (In p17-19, Mirai is talking about a future vision, so lines like "I told it this" seem like they're in the wrong tense and should maybe be more like "I'll tell it this". Same with "Why did you...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL p3 Please be of no concern -> Please don't be concerned p5 that, bomber -> that bomber p7 Don't Cross at a Red Light -> ["Green Light, Red Light" is actually p9 follow after her -> chase her p15 at time like these -> at times like...

You'd think Sumire got scammed, but this supposedly indestructible phone might well get destroyed every time she transforms. In which case that overly generous warranty would be an absolute bargain despite the insane sticker price. How many phones does Sumire need to go through before it's the...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @_Yanagi_ p23 top secret information [...] were stolen -> top secret information [...] was stolen -> p24 original's story -> original story

Thanks for the chapter! Typo & edit suggestions: @lin_tvdchick p32 settled things up -> settled things p34 who died as a villainess -> who had died as a villainess p34 who died as a villainess, and even though -> who died as a villainess. And even though [<-> run-on sentence] p35 share...

I appreciate the detailed reply, and I'm perfectly content with your explanation for why these lines shouldn't be changed. That said, please don't feel the need to reply in such depth to my feedback comments. I make a ton of them on scanlated manga chapters I read, in hopes of helping the...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @dexec p3 Here's an advice. -> Here's my advice. p4 kills anything be it -> kills anyone, be it p4 that kills so swift and clean -> that kills so swiftly and cleanly // whose kills are so swift and clean p6 almost familiar, someone -> almost...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @roppatsu p6 dead men talk no tales -> dead men tell no tales p15 -Lity. -> -lity.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @StopwatchTL p10 the news are on -> the news is on p11 I got no -> I've got no p12 kinda feel off -> feel kinda off p12 just as I expected from -> just as expected from p15 underestimate them and be sure -> underestimate them and you're sure...

Thanks for the chapter! Typo: @Nosebleed p26 what happned -> what happened p35 not even I can't -> not even I can p35 I come to I'm -> I come to, I'm p35 to use set up -> to use // to set up

Thanks for the chapter! Typo: @The_Lamb p16 if were possible -> if it were possible

Thanks for the chapter! Typo: @anonymousan p20 didn't even have a single -> didn't even have a single friend

Thanks for the chapters! @Contributor Though note that chapter 68 is currently missing on Mangadex.