Imo rival looks too similar to mc, especially when blushing. But well, personalities are distinct enough that I don’t really see myself getting overly confused.
Who’s this asshole? Does the author lack that many ideas to bring to the story that they have to resort to some stupid homophobic asshole? I know it was sorta foreshadowed when he commented on their holding hands, but that doesn’t make it good. Hopefully I’m wrong about the dude, but his...
This looks good but several pages of characters explaining the backstory to each other in such a forced way is never good any time I’ve seen it. But whatever. The author was probably just trying to get it out of the way as fast as possible.
@Babiapalah
For no reason. That is, it did not feel justified within the story. Sure, the reason of the people in the story might be there, but the justification for those actions felt shoddily written to me. Contrived. Falling into place in such a way that lacks cohesion and feels forced. Also...
@Babiapalah @DonHazzy
So more specifically it was attempted human trafficking. They literally stripped her though and in both situations, if the main character hadn’t arrived in the nick of time, she would have inevitably been raped, whether at that moment, or taken somewhere to be raped. Do...
> Main female lead is almost raped twice in one chapter for no reason.
> Main male lead is very cool.
Why put a good main character in a series like this? 😟