Recent content by Shad0wReaper133

Had a blast reading this, can't wait to read more. Cheers.

@chicken2436 Thanks for the release, been enjoying this story. Did notice something though, the line: "You don't become Pantheum's Guardian just because you want to*" I don't think I need to go into the differences between "to" and "too" do I.

Looking forward to actually reading through the mass releases again for the better translation. Just to make sure there was nothing I completely missed out due to MTL. Keep up the good work.

Good quality and easy to understand translation? Thank you, keep up the good work.

@Soseki Page 4, "Their" H-Energy, not "They're" H-Energy.

@Soseki On page 39, it should be "You're" kidding, not "Your" kidding.

@RimuruXD Needlessly aggressive much? I don't see what the point of getting all worked up for is about.

@Zeozzz "How could the devils find* us" - Should be "find", not "found". Both instances of "its body" should have "its" used and not "it's" and same goes for "its eyes" since "its" is the possessive use form. I'd consider getting a proofreader to help you tidy up the translation.

@LittlePuri Just noticed some things, for the first line it should probably be either of the examples I've listed depending on taste so it doesn't read like a machine translation. "Why do I have to wear these kinds of clothes?" "Why do I have to wear this kind of clothing?" And the second is...

@wickerbottom So you're saying the English translators understanding the rules of their own language is too difficult and requires too much effort? What?

@wickerbottom So you're saying translations don't matter then? Also, citation please on your claim.

@Corus You once again have proven that you didn't comprehend anything that video. The snakes can pass TOXINS to their young, how, we don't know. Which in turn makes the baby snakes more ready to defend themselves... with their venomous teeth... that they're born with... Yeah this conversation...

@Corus You might need to brush up on your reading skills, because if you re-read what I said, I specified a snake BITE as being venomous. Also, you need to watch the video again, snakes can only be "poisonous" if they've eaten poisonous frogs. So no, there are no poisonous snakes. PS: cUrReNt...

@chieftanin Pages 7 and 11, a snake bite contains venom, not poison. Snakes are venomous after all, not poisonous.

@SNKY On page 10, why was it decided to split the word "everyone" like "ever-yone" when "every-one" would make way more sense? Especially when it's done this way on page 11.