Excellent job as always. I fully love the sfx redraws.
One small correction - p4 on the left side you have a panel saying "mizguchi" when should be mizuguchi.
Thanks for the excellent as always translation.
Funny that you told us how many US Dollars the 10k yen was, instead of the more standard Norwegian Krone (about 592 NOK).
Just binged this. Thanks for the TL - overall pretty good and consistently legible, but why tf are the names so all over the place? Shitoen/Sitoen, D/Tidros ... Many examples.