Pretty fun shit. Going by the comments, should be a short series that burns fast. Not bad.
I started reading from chapter 2, and I honestly think that's how the story should've started.
Enough unknowns to make the reader ask questions, but ch2 focuses on the action, so it's easy to read and you...
Just saying:
The line-spacing (space between both lines) is too short, and the white stroke makes it hard to read the text proper. I recommend that you either make the white sroke thinner, or give it more spacing.
You should also probably increase the font's size, as, you know, aggregators tend...
While I agree, it's not as much of a plot point as it should be. It's 80% fluff, random action while shouting keywords like "Dungeons!" or "S-rank!", and whatnot.
Basically: great premise, agreed, but mediocre execution.
Like Rafalga said, it turns generic and loses its identity.
It feels like...
Intent is more important.
You can have interesting stories with OPMCs, look at OPM.
The thing is, the reader needs other things to focus on.
Interesting characters, world, interesting usage of his powers, etc.
This ad is just a lazy slop with nothing in it. It's just so unfortunate.
Shit.
There are ways to do auto interesting. This ain't it.
This is about an MC who both wants and doesn't want to do anything, as people shower him with praise and affection, when he personally doesn't do anything. Literally the premise.
Cringe and bad implementation of self-insert motivation...
Likely stuff like Rush/Special meter and whatnot. The MC did mention "special moves" in this chapter, and I believe we also saw that queen's guard perform a special move as well.
I wouldn't even be surprised if Tekken "wave dashing" will be a thing, derp.
The story hasn't also explored i-frames...
What's there to lose, y'all?
The Elves are almost as worse as the demons ("amost" being the operative word, it is quite amazing how god awful actual demons are),
And -- a lot of punches and emotions fly about. Big shounen conclusions. ezpz.
At this point, we need a sub-category for Adaptation.
We need the Advertisement category.
I.E: Any manga adaptation of a LN/WN, that will ONLY run through the 1st arc.
This wasn't a good story by any means, but I'm really sick and tired of this shit.
Looks pretty bad, but I still contend that OPM S3 is much worse, if that's your example.
(That being said, indeed shockingly low quality for a legendary manga such as Berserk.)