I too like to greet people with expressions on my face and say words from my mouth like, “Hello fellow human! I am a human person as well! I am made of meat and skin! Would you like to consume pig fat and chicken menstruation with me this morning?”
Maybe I just don’t have the eye for it, but your redrawing looked just fine to me and I wouldn’t have even known English wasn’t your first language if you hadn’t said anything.
I think it’d be okay for you to have a little more confidence in yourself.
@the_HENTAI_protagonist: Whitepod, the typesetter for the original scanlators of How Not to Summon a Demon King (yes, my taste is garbage, I’m aware of it already), had a legit autistic meltdown because someone edited out his fucking terrible attempts at humor before posting to some manga site...
It’s not so much that the translator needs to keep his opinions to himself. That’s his prerogative. It’s just that his attempts at humor are so cringeworthy that it actively detracts from the manga.
“So older people are more prone to miasma poisoning...”
It’s the Boomer Remover! What up, COVID? 😂
This manga would be so much better if the translator weren’t autistic.