He's an old man. Well, by youngster standards. They're usually wrong.
Totally random kids. Not important whatsoever.
I like the design of Miranda's clothes. Her personality... Let's leave that for later.
This dwarf is special. He's great. And an excellent smith.
Dialogue on page 17 is a bit awkward. Though MC is awkward.
Cute dress.
I wouldn't call that "full body" equipment. That should include arms and lower legs.
"Wear this properly, ok!??"
Yeah, that thing she doesn't care much about.
Very aggressive. Totally won't be a problem.
Yeah, good she came there alone so she can be disposed of more easily.
He's not chubby. He's stocky.
Random thugs, get randomly killed.
And she appears. Best character in the story.
"Snipe." I've seen tax returns faster than this.
Seems like she attracted another violence child to herself, at the end. I wonder what that one's all about.
She's awesome. That's all I'll say. And calling her a "violence child" is...
appropriate.