First chapter:
Sure, seems like a healthy loving family. Great... Goddess sama is cute and peppy.
Second chapter:
That was one heck of a training arc! So much effort... Ahem, all jokes aside, after 6 years of being 'cold'?! Like, in a coma, your body should still be warm, as it still functions and all, but he was brought back to Emma's home basically a corpse? Wow. Quite the diligent girl you are, Emma! Maybe even a bit scary, taking care of a corpse?
But how is he able to move right away, after a 6 year coma?
And of course, right after he wakes up, with perfect timing, some disaster happens that hasn't come in all the time he was unconscious. Is it a 'test' of the goddess?
Then (obsessive?) Emma wants them to stay together and he can hear the wedding bells in his head, but... NOPE!
Revenge it is!!
Third chapter:
What a thoughtful goddes... She must REALLY want him to go have revenge. She didn't train him for 2000 years for nothing after all. Still, should a god/goddess really be supporting vengeance? Wouldn't a 'go lead a happy life with Emma' encouragement have been more... Fitting?
Anyway, apparently we're going to school now... At the age of 16... What do kids do in this world, if the school going age is 16?!(Also, great way to respond to random passerby. "Yeah, so?" Would it hurt you to be polite? You were raised a noble, right?)
I'm pretty sure you already KNEW telekinesis was considered a crap skill, you were after all, killed for it! Moron!
... And making 'friends' right of fthe bat, of course and then needing to prove himself, even though he already did to that exact same person. What do you think is goig to be different the second time?
Sigh...
Fourth chapter (Why am I still reading this?):
Great logic in the backstory. "All our country had to offer were mineral resources."
Oh, you mean the stuff that tends to have lots of value, so your kingdom should be wealthy?
NOPE! The kingdom was poor... HOW?!
Okay, we get it already, sobstory means that bad guy isn't really a bad guy, just an arrogant jerk that has something to prove.But at least another arrogant idiot gets to say something edgy, so cringe, it hurts my head.
Fith chapter (No seriously, WHY am I still reading this?! At least it's the last one available now):
Tsundere Gumbo??
Of course, they are bro's now! It's the bro-code that all is forgiven, after you fight and get your feelings across, or something like that.
Anyway, even if you're pissed at your sibblings, get your emo nonsense under control, will ya?! You're kind of doing property damage there.
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And thus, conludes the read through of these few chapters. That was not fun at all, except for the cute demon getting a rock dropped on his head, when he was just having fun. Poor demon dude. Well, that and the peppy goddess. She was also kind of cute, but I still don't get why she would send him out there to et revenge, but maybe he will be stopping some world ending nonsense in the future, so she needed him for that, or whatever. I don't know, I don't care, I am not going to wait for who knows how many years to find out about it.
This is not in any way the worst thing I've ver read, but it isn't any good either, so this is a drop. Thanks for... Ehm... Nothing I guess. Goodbye.