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This probably has the most dogshit world building I've ever seen in a piece of fiction. And the translation is meh at best. Instead of translating the whole page with its context in mind, it feels like it's bubble by bubble.
 
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10/10, masterpiece
reasons?
  • Fat MC
  • Fat MC staying Fat
  • Fat MC isn't 'Saitama'
  • Fat MC trying to stay in the shadows & too passive?
  • Fat MC trying to follow the story-line so he can predict the future
  • Fat MC triggering readers without many brain cells
  • Fat MC body proportion is so insane it's top tier art
  • Female art top-tier with big titties
  • FMC getting hate cause she left MC (since she was disappointed in MC)
  • Storyline so complex that your average 'sheep' can't follow
  • Why so many characters? cast should only be MC & harem seed-takers.

Official Name for LN is
''Finding Avalon: The Quest of a Chaosbringer''
should rename it
"Finding Avalon: The Farming for the CommentRagers"

Go read a power fantasy isekai, if this isn't your cup of tea. As if we are lacking other manga's with OP isekai MC shoving their giga-chad dikk inside every enemy they can plough through
 
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10/10, masterpiece
reasons?
  • Fat MC
  • Fat MC staying Fat
  • Fat MC isn't 'Saitama'
  • Fat MC trying to stay in the shadows & too passive?
  • Fat MC trying to follow the story-line so he can predict the future
  • Fat MC triggering readers without many brain cells
  • Fat MC body proportion is so insane it's top tier art
  • Female art top-tier with big titties
  • FMC getting hate cause she left MC (since she was disappointed in MC)
  • Storyline so complex that your average 'sheep' to follow
  • Why so many characters? cast should only be MC & harem seed-takers.

Official Name for LN is
''Finding Avalon: The Quest of a Chaosbringer''
should rename it
"Finding Avalon: The Farming for the CommentRagers"

Go read a power fantasy isekai, if this isn't your cup of tea. As if we are lacking other manga's with OP isekai MC shoving their giga-chad dikk inside every enemy they can plough through
When did the internet become full of these retards who think they're "intellectual" just for being contrary to the average opinion?

"Look at me guys, everyone pay attention to me, I actually like the thing that you don't like. You just don't like the thing because your taste isn't nearly as developed and refined as mine.
I can't really explain why I like the thing, all I can do is ignore everything that you actually criticized and fabricate worthless assumptions about what you like based on my own delusions, sometimes I feel like I'm too smart for my own good, harhar. Now excuse me while I suck my own dick and vape my own farts, both at the same time, because I'm just so talented."

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When did the internet become full of these retards who think they're "intellectual" just for being contrary to the average opinion?

"Look at me guys, everyone pay attention to me, I actually like the thing that you don't like. You just don't like the thing because your taste isn't nearly as developed and refined as mine.
I can't really explain why I like the thing, all I can do is ignore everything that you actually criticized and fabricate worthless assumptions about what you like based on my own delusions, sometimes I feel like I'm too smart for my own good, harhar. Now excuse me while I suck my own dick and vape my own farts, both at the same time, because I'm just so talented."

🥱🥱
You see the same thing when a series gets praised because characters are getting killed left and right. That's good because it's not the norm and this is also good because mc isn't "OP". Ridiculous attempt at trying to be "different". Some people genuinely think a story is good because mc is a pathetic loser, lol.
 
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This manga kinda sucks. Female lead is VERY unlikable and dumb (I've read the latest chapter just now) she really picks the dude who she rejected like 8 chapters beforehand. And the MC being one of the strongest students is STILL being a coward?? Bro really just let that white haired kid (who just stole his girl btw) just sht on him like that?? Bro could have ONE SHOT him. 🤦🏿‍♂️
 
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So bad, that it's sort of entertaining. A stew of cliches glued together with complete lack of plot logic.

Plus there's the amusement of reading comments about how bad the latest chapter is.
 
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When did the internet become full of these retards who think they're "intellectual" just for being contrary to the average opinion?

"Look at me guys, everyone pay attention to me, I actually like the thing that you don't like. You just don't like the thing because your taste isn't nearly as developed and refined as mine.
I can't really explain why I like the thing, all I can do is ignore everything that you actually criticized and fabricate worthless assumptions about what you like based on my own delusions, sometimes I feel like I'm too smart for my own good, harhar. Now excuse me while I suck my own dick and vape my own farts, both at the same time, because I'm just so talented."

🥱🥱
There's nothing wrong with disliking this manga but at least give it proper criticism the most dumbass comments I've replied to don't. It's just stupid shit like their failure to comprehend the MCs actions. There are actually some reasons to dislike this manga like the pacing could be not their taste which is fine but it is not slow. It's slow compared to shounentard standards. The fact the butao character is still influencing him which still fking annoys me. But no most of the complaints are why isn't he breaking the scenario and becoming OP. Like bro it's obvious why. Like go ask chatgpt or whatever what the butterfly affect is and it'll probably tell you why his actions are smart in not interfering too much. At least for now.
 
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There's nothing wrong with disliking this manga but at least give it proper criticism the most dumbass comments I've replied to don't. It's just stupid shit like their failure to comprehend the MCs actions. There are actually some reasons to dislike this manga like the pacing could be not their taste which is fine but it is not slow. It's slow compared to shounentard standards. The fact the butao character is still influencing him which still fking annoys me. But no most of the complaints are why isn't he breaking the scenario and becoming OP. Like bro it's obvious why. Like go ask chatgpt or whatever what the butterfly affect is and it'll probably tell you why his actions are smart in not interfering too much. At least for now.
You say that but there are plenty of comments explaining exactly why his reasoning makes no sense.

- In the first place, a reason was never given for why the story needs to progress exactly like it was in the game, there's no event mentioned where the main character needed to be the hero to save the world or anything like that. And even if that were the case and the main character's growth was something that was so dire for him to be concerned about, all he has to do is help the main character to grow, but he doesn't.

- Even if he did have unexplained but legitimate reasons that the story needs to progress exactly like the original, it's all been made meaningless from pretty much the start. He himself has already caused a lot of divergence from the original plot just by his very presence, not to mention all of his seemingly "subtle" actions that have caused so many influential people to start paying attention to and interacting with him. So he himself has already invalidated all his efforts but on top of that, there are very clearly other irregulars in the world who have already messed things up with their own influences, and that's not something he'd be able to control no matter what he does, unless he's ready to actually start killing people, which he very obviously is not going to do.

At this point it's already clear that any efforts he makes to make sure the original story plays out as intended are already meaningless and have been without purpose from the start. Unless I'm forgetting some reason that he actually explained for why he really needs the story to play out, to which, feel free to enlighten me if that's the case.
That being said, the crux of the matter is that all these factors have resulted in a story that's very frustrating and not very enjoyable. What the audience generally want to read is the main character's story, even if it's a story about said main character doing things from the shadows, that is often enjoyable in it's own ways. But this manga is neither, the main character constantly forces himself out of the picture while simultaneously refusing to have any influence in the other main characters' stories. By making the entire aim of the manga the mere preservation of some random storyline that none of us as readers are privy to, it basically amounts to a manga where we read about a main character just watching the story of some made up game play out without actually doing anything relevant himself. None of the game's original characters are interesting enough to make us as readers actually care about whatever predetermined plot they live their lives through while the actual main character of this manga is acting as nothing but a plank that's just there to make sure that this boring game stays boring and uneventful.

So what exactly are we as readers meant to enjoy about this manga? It's practically the same as watching some brainrot "irl" streamer sit in a chair and eat while watching other people's Youtube videos and calling it "content".
 
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After 43 chapters, here's what I think: it's only interesting when the story focuses on the MC and his sister/family, unfortunately it only does that 1/3 or half the time and the secondary characters are boring too. Besides, even when the MC is the focus of the story, he is far too passive, so most of the time nothing particularly interesting happens, except for the main characters being harassed or abused by someone else.

If you want some good "I was transported into a school inside a game" type of story, with good secondary characters that don't overstay their welcome, then you should read The Extra's Academy Survival Guide, I Killed An Academy Player, The Novel's Extra or I Took Over The Academy With A Single Sashimi Knife.

There's also Pick Me Up Infinite Gacha, Tyrant Of The Tower Defense Game and Surviving The Game As A Barbarian. Those last three don't take place inside an academy or a school, but they do take place inside a game and they are all excellent.
 
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There's nothing wrong with disliking this manga but at least give it proper criticism the most dumbass comments I've replied to don't. It's just stupid shit like their failure to comprehend the MCs actions. There are actually some reasons to dislike this manga like the pacing could be not their taste which is fine but it is not slow. It's slow compared to shounentard standards. The fact the butao character is still influencing him which still fking annoys me. But no most of the complaints are why isn't he breaking the scenario and becoming OP. Like bro it's obvious why. Like go ask chatgpt or whatever what the butterfly affect is and it'll probably tell you why his actions are smart in not interfering too much. At least for now.
Little bro. This story has little to no progression; hence, the story will exist the same way as it is without the MC. This makes the MC insignificant and poorly written. A side character literally has more impact and screentime than him.

Ever heard of the manhawa Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint?
That's how you write an MC who knows the plot of the story and actually does some action.

And he's supposed to be OP since he's one of the strongest players to exist in the game. And even with the freedom of players, the game has a set flow of events rather than an infinite story generation... Hence him doing something different will still follow the end of the story if he wants to. The author just tries so hard to make this like re:zero or something.
 
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Little bro. This story has little to no progression; hence, the story will exist the same way as it is without the MC. This makes the MC insignificant and poorly written. A side character literally has more impact and screentime than him.

Ever heard of the manhawa Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint?
That's how you write an MC who knows the plot of the story and actually does some action.

And he's supposed to be OP since he's one of the strongest players to exist in the game. And even with the freedom of players, the game has a set flow of events rather than an infinite story generation... Hence him doing something different will still follow the end of the story if he wants to. The author just tries so hard to make this like re:zero or something.
If you actually read that you'd know the difference is that the original MC in that is a regressor in the middle of multiple regressions, the protagonist is aware that the current regression is doomed without his interference and is scared about what will happen if he doesn't and the original MC regresses. This story has a single plot with no regressions that will progress without the MC. The protagonist in that one is also forced to be involved because it's a world ending scenario where he can die during any point. You're a moron if you think their circumstances are the same other than both knowing the plot. The only thing the MC in this story can do ATM is grind. He has no real cheats like in omniscient.
 
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Tbh, story is wasted on side characters that don’t even have a single iota of development while the mc is still stuck in pretending stage even though the lime light is already pointed to him after the class battle.

There’s a similar isekai manga where the mc was transported to an otome game and was prioritizing the story first but then realized that the life he had in the game is his new life so he slowly accepted it and protected the ones he hold dear. I wish something identical happens to this manga and have mc take the problems in to his own hands.
 
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If you actually read that you'd know the difference is that the original MC in that is a regressor in the middle of multiple regressions, the protagonist is aware that the current regression is doomed without his interference and is scared about what will happen if he doesn't and the original MC regresses. This story has a single plot with no regressions that will progress without the MC. The protagonist in that one is also forced to be involved because it's a world ending scenario where he can die during any point. You're a moron if you think their circumstances are the same other than both knowing the plot. The only thing the MC in this story can do ATM is grind. He has no real cheats like in omniscient.
In Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint: The "Scenario MC" is a regressor but that aspect is simply his role in the story's plot that is "LINEAR" due to it having a single ending (The MC literally finished the the novel himself, therefore making the story ONLY have a singular ending).
- The fact that omniscient reader is a novel and NOT A GAME setting (like this manga) that contains freedom of the players leading to multiple scenarios means that the MC's decision in Omniscient reader is more sensitive than this manga here. Yet despite the sensitivity, he still did more and used his role perfectly rather than just sit and watch.

And no cheat abilities? Little bro literally knows methods and tricks that AREN'T even in their LIBRARY (a collection of written knowledge). It's like having a gun in the medieval era.

You're just pretending to sound different. Omniscient MC's actions are more careful because it's on a novel setting (singular ending) and he is even forced therefore his actions affects things more. Yet even all that he still did more than the MC here. You just destroyed your own comment without knowing it
 
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All of you keep yappin about MC being weak, fat, and don't want to meddle in the story of the game despite the circumstance of the other player already step in (Tsukishima).

Just look at the new raw chap 85. he use AMERICAN Breathing First Form : GLOCK, and Beat the shit of Tsukishima guy
 
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mc still stays whiny pig retard that barely does anything and his ass is forced to stay that forever
goddamnit japan
 
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there is so many thing i hate about this manga.
but here short version of it
the manga add something that didn't exist in novel. and drag slow story to a halt.
in a fucking story that is already slow, who decide that adapt into manga form that is going to be slower required more plot?
if you like a premises like this then try the novel version. it really change many of the context and make story a lot less rage bait.
and much much more enjoyable.



Long version
to explain a bit. in novel version, the story usually stay with mc part so you don't spend time seeing people get abuse just to cut into mc jay walking around. it just mc jay walking while worry about people getting abuse in manga. then you see his monolog on his solution and so on.
The story plot is about getting stronger in fantasy world than revenge plot, so asshole get beat up didn't really come up as a focus. so you don't spend 3 chapter see character you suppose to like getting abuse and shit just to cut to MC walking around doing jack shit unlike in this manga.

but in manga not only did they decide to drag story slower by adding focus on misery. they also decide to half-ass try to give spotlight on MC's classmate like this shit is Naruto.


During festival, MC sister didn't get beat up and almost capture (and probably done some gruesome on her like Rap- if this world building were anything to go by) NO, Mc straight up give everything he have to his sister to ensure she didn't take any risk. and she beat the ass out of enemy. which make fucking sense, cause sister got op item, more lv + more skill in a world where people usually rely on LV.
yet the story have a weak ass classmate somehow pull a hail marry. that hail marry probably got them beat up if we stay consistent.
and this change a lot of context, from MC stay careful and it end up reward him: a story about careful grinding and strike back at enemy where it hurt.

Now it turn into: a wimpy moron abandon his friend and then left his sister alone to fight a fucking yakuza and she almost got done in.
but of Couse manga still go by novel context, So mc didn't bother to check in with his sister and talk about how serious the situation is. just went back to sleep like it nothing.
CAUSE IT FUCKING NOTHING IN NOVEL His sister beat their ass so sore they try to flip entire school to find her. sister is consider 1st class of that world with her level and all the op skill MC taught her.

The change in manga also fuck up plot. it force one of main classmate that is stronger than usual to fight. later the asshole elite try to find who "strongest" in class Loser, so they beat up fucking everyone but her Why?!? it make no sense even more.
In novel, non of classmate got into fight, so the beat up only target the male member that is usually vocal ie OGMC. now it turn into teamwork hazing where everyone got beat up but the target.

i read current raw, but manga also try to give a grace and dignity to a moron that try to mind control "heroine" despite in novel dude just stay depress and give up after losing.
it a fucking mess. try novel, it pacing still slow as shit. but it write context around every situation better and make MC passiveness a lot more understandable, instead of wimpy psychopaths we get in manga.
 
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