MC power wasn’t enough to beat kidnapper > when cornered, his master came to rescue > MC carries unconscious Linderan > accidentally falls and suffers fatal wound > kidnapper is taken down by master and flees > kidnapper is later killed by Linderan grandfather. The story pacing is way too fast
Sick burn, yoI'm sure the remaining ashes will be amenable to questioning.
Poor storyboarding and messy art (I didn't realize dude got decapitated until the story spelled it out).The hecc is going on? This chapter feels incredibly jumpy and incoherent. A perfect demonstration of this, then this, and then this, story telling.
Why do I feel like the future explosion that caused massive grief was this gramps blowing up the house with the girl inside it?"Where are the hostages?!", I demand as I blast the kidnapper with Fire 3, obliterating him and preventing him from telling me anything