Netorare Tsuihousareta Saikyou Kishi Danchou No Ossan, Katainaka De Eiyuu Ni Matsuriagerareru - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[cascadiareader]

Great art, story is okay I guess. I probably won't stick around for this one

Did we read the same thing? The art for the action scenes is not exciting at all.

 

[Done25]

I have been reading the WN a bit today, just to see how the betrayal ends. I'm a bit disappointed on how it ended... It's not really bad but i expected more.

Let's start with Warrena, his party consists of the twins Meg and Bill, Ellie the Saintess, Mimi the Cat girl, Chloe the Guardian Dragon girl, and her attendants Liza and Elsa. These are our main characters.
The main antagonist of part 1 is Patrick. Princess Talyn is just an idiot... You'll see why in the summary below.

So as for the story, all the shit that happened to Warrena is because of Patrick. He is actually a spy who infiltrated from the neighbor country, the Empire. His goal was to get rid of the kingdoms strongest assets, Warrena and Chloe, so they can take the country.
As i said above, Princess Talyn is just an idiot who got seduced and used by him. She never loved Warrena, he was pushed on her by the King, she always found him boring. Anyway thanks to her Patrick succeeded in getting rid of Warrena as we saw in this ch. He gets rid of Chloe just by chance as she leaves the Kingdom on her own to join Warrena. She only cares about him, no one else, not even the Royal family.
Patrick also got rid of the last defense, Warrena's squad which was led by Gil now. The new 2nd in command Sonia betrayed them and they got ambushed and captured.
Here is where it got a bit disappointing, at least for me... Talyn didn't want to listen to the doctors and she lost the baby. But she decided to keep quiet because she was afraid Patrick will leave her if he finds out. One night she goes to his room but overhears him talking to someone. He was planning to launch an attack on the Kingdom now that their main defenses are gone. He then easily persuaded Talyn to join the Empire and be the new Queen. The idiot fell for it ofc...
So Talyn then lured the rest of her family in the dungeon during the attack, and they were all killed down there by Patrick and his soldiers. Talyn was actually happy seeing her sisters get killed, but she didn't know she was next! Patrick then showers her with sweet words only to coldly tell her she will never be a Queen and that he knows she lost the baby. The reason was him, he gave the doctors some kind of abortion pills to give her. As she is shocked he stabs her in the chest with his sword. She curses him until she died. Rip idiot!

So a few days later Warrena gets a a notice that he must come to the Palace by King's order (you can't ignore this or you will become a wanted criminal). The reason stated is that the King died and the 1st Princess the new Ruler wants to make his exile right. He consults his party and decides to go, bringing Ellie, Chloe and Liza with him. When they enter the Palace they notice to much guards and pretty much know something is fishy. In the throne room they find Patrick as the new King. After some back and forth words Warrena easily figures out what is going on... Patrick then gives them an option to join him or to die. Warrena is a bit worried since he basically has to fight alone since Chloe has some kind of pact with the Kingdom which doesn't allow her to fight or harm it's citizens. He decides to fight! Liza defends Ellie who starts praying to cast buffs and heals on Warren as he unleash his Blessing "God of War"! He becomes like a unstoppable killing machine but the side effect is he is losing HP fast. So he mows down all the soldiers and faints...
As he wakes up he finds himself in Ellie's lap. Wondering what happened he looks for Patrick only to see his body splattered on the throne. Chloe tells him the idiot shouted he doesn't care for the Kingdom which broke her pact and she just one shot him with a punch

After that they go to the dungeon to free Gil and his crew, and they find Talyn's body in one of the cells...

And that's it for part 1 of the story. There are 2 more parts, actually 1 and a half... Looks like the author abandoned the WN last year.

Sorry if it's a bit to much but i couldn't skip most of this to give a full picture. If someone who also read the WN finds some mistakes fell free to correct me

Thank you for saving all of us time and brain cells.

 

[IronMan659]

Kind of anticlimatic, so the villains just get themselves killed on their own through stupidity

I find that pretty hilarious to be honest.

 

[Oblycoris]

Bro that title have me a whiplash the moment I saw ntr words, holy hell and then of course expected same old same old trash but DAMN it's actually decent I might try and find the light novel to read who knows and glad it's harem I doubt the author is gonna do harem the right way but HEY who cares it's entertaining

 

[Kuroku]

Sounds like the guy she cheated on him already regretting real fast

 

[Lightbrand]

Oh no this princess I've never met is pregnant. Okay just give me the money and I (the strongest person ever btw) will be off to do whatever.

Who lost out on a draft steal here?

 

[kamentierr]

Now that's what i'm talking about. The nation didn't treat you properly despite your achievements? They betrayed your expectations? Then get the fk out and move to other nations!

 

[Gallowx]

the kid didnt do anything other then that i agree

Life is unfair

 

[musul]

Nope, only that Princess. He had feelings for her but she never liked him. The King forced him on her, she always thought he was boring and didn't even like talking to him. She is an arrogant selfish bitch, so he actually got saved by losing her

As for the other girls, all 3 don't hide their feelings...
Ellie tells him she wants to be with him and that she will wait for him no matter how long it takes.
Mimi want him to be her mate since the time he saved her. After he refuses she straight up tells him she is ok with him just violating her
Chloe is more like "he is mine", since he is her Dragon Rider. She only cares for him, even tho she has a pact with the Royal Family and the whole country, it doesn't matter to her since she only sees him.

MC is surprisingly not dense! He knows about their feelings even before they told him, Ellie especially (she is his late best friends daughter btw). But he is a bit broken by the betrayal and doesn't feel like jumping into romance any time soon. He even says he knows Ellie would never betray him like the Princess but it still bothers him. He feels like he betrayed her in some way by agreeing to the King's engagement plan.

Btw Warrena doesn't know what the Princess is really like, that's probably the main reason for him feeling insecure about new relationships. And he will never find out since the whole family was killed before he meet them again.


I did not see anything about this in part 1 of the WN. I might have missed it if he only mentioned it, but there is no one like that who plays a bigger role.

Thanks a LOT MAN!!!

 

[chojinra]

Not sure why everyone wants spoilers, but I'm glad people here use the spoiler functions. I just like enjoying the journey, but it's not that serious for me.

Also, 69th comment. Noice.

 

[TiaoAK47]

I have been reading the WN a bit today, just to see how the betrayal ends. I'm a bit disappointed on how it ended... It's not really bad but i expected more.

Let's start with Warrena, his party consists of the twins Meg and Bill, Ellie the Saintess, Mimi the Cat girl, Chloe the Guardian Dragon girl, and her attendants Liza and Elsa. These are our main characters.
The main antagonist of part 1 is Patrick. Princess Talyn is just an idiot... You'll see why in the summary below.

So as for the story, all the shit that happened to Warrena is because of Patrick. He is actually a spy who infiltrated from the neighbor country, the Empire. His goal was to get rid of the kingdoms strongest assets, Warrena and Chloe, so they can take the country.
As i said above, Princess Talyn is just an idiot who got seduced and used by him. She never loved Warrena, he was pushed on her by the King, she always found him boring. Anyway thanks to her Patrick succeeded in getting rid of Warrena as we saw in this ch. He gets rid of Chloe just by chance as she leaves the Kingdom on her own to join Warrena. She only cares about him, no one else, not even the Royal family.
Patrick also got rid of the last defense, Warrena's squad which was led by Gil now. The new 2nd in command Sonia betrayed them and they got ambushed and captured.
Here is where it got a bit disappointing, at least for me... Talyn didn't want to listen to the doctors and she lost the baby. But she decided to keep quiet because she was afraid Patrick will leave her if he finds out. One night she goes to his room but overhears him talking to someone. He was planning to launch an attack on the Kingdom now that their main defenses are gone. He then easily persuaded Talyn to join the Empire and be the new Queen. The idiot fell for it ofc...
So Talyn then lured the rest of her family in the dungeon during the attack, and they were all killed down there by Patrick and his soldiers. Talyn was actually happy seeing her sisters get killed, but she didn't know she was next! Patrick then showers her with sweet words only to coldly tell her she will never be a Queen and that he knows she lost the baby. The reason was him, he gave the doctors some kind of abortion pills to give her. As she is shocked he stabs her in the chest with his sword. She curses him until she died. Rip idiot!

So a few days later Warrena gets a a notice that he must come to the Palace by King's order (you can't ignore this or you will become a wanted criminal). The reason stated is that the King died and the 1st Princess the new Ruler wants to make his exile right. He consults his party and decides to go, bringing Ellie, Chloe and Liza with him. When they enter the Palace they notice to much guards and pretty much know something is fishy. In the throne room they find Patrick as the new King. After some back and forth words Warrena easily figures out what is going on... Patrick then gives them an option to join him or to die. Warrena is a bit worried since he basically has to fight alone since Chloe has some kind of pact with the Kingdom which doesn't allow her to fight or harm it's citizens. He decides to fight! Liza defends Ellie who starts praying to cast buffs and heals on Warren as he unleash his Blessing "God of War"! He becomes like a unstoppable killing machine but the side effect is he is losing HP fast. So he mows down all the soldiers and faints...
As he wakes up he finds himself in Ellie's lap. Wondering what happened he looks for Patrick only to see his body splattered on the throne. Chloe tells him the idiot shouted he doesn't care for the Kingdom which broke her pact and she just one shot him with a punch

After that they go to the dungeon to free Gil and his crew, and they find Talyn's body in one of the cells...

And that's it for part 1 of the story. There are 2 more parts, actually 1 and a half... Looks like the author abandoned the WN last year.

Sorry if it's a bit to much but i couldn't skip most of this to give a full picture. If someone who also read the WN finds some mistakes fell free to correct me

Thanks for the spoilers. Sounds like terrible trash.

 

[WJ_PK]

Did we read the same thing? The art for the action scenes is not exciting at all.

I meant more the artstyle itself. No need to get your knickers in a twist comrade

 

[SardonicJester]

What a mess they made of the scans.

 

[ShinduPK4]

Not being able to fight back does piss me off.

I mean, he didn't even think to try. I'm sure there is a noble faction that opposes the royal family. He could've gone to them. A royal scandal is always a juicy event to make use of.

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[…] He gives up on his kingdom out of despair and decides to use his compensation money to live a slow and leisurely life in the countryside. One after another, he encounters a saint and a fox girl, and they eventually end up falling for him. However, he himself has a reason why he can't fall in love with them…? […]

The synopsis makes it seem like it's going to be annoying, with women throwing themselves at him and him behaving like the classic Japanese virgin protagonist.

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— Right, if only "he" was here… Umm… That "strongest" knight commander…
— Who cares about that boring man, Warrena, who died miserably?
— W… Wanna come along with me?

This dialogue doesn't make sense to me. Am I missing something?

 

[sirleirbag]

I have been reading the WN a bit today, just to see how the betrayal ends. I'm a bit disappointed on how it ended... It's not really bad but i expected more.

Let's start with Warrena, his party consists of the twins Meg and Bill, Ellie the Saintess, Mimi the Cat girl, Chloe the Guardian Dragon girl, and her attendants Liza and Elsa. These are our main characters.
The main antagonist of part 1 is Patrick. Princess Talyn is just an idiot... You'll see why in the summary below.

So as for the story, all the shit that happened to Warrena is because of Patrick. He is actually a spy who infiltrated from the neighbor country, the Empire. His goal was to get rid of the kingdoms strongest assets, Warrena and Chloe, so they can take the country.
As i said above, Princess Talyn is just an idiot who got seduced and used by him. She never loved Warrena, he was pushed on her by the King, she always found him boring. Anyway thanks to her Patrick succeeded in getting rid of Warrena as we saw in this ch. He gets rid of Chloe just by chance as she leaves the Kingdom on her own to join Warrena. She only cares about him, no one else, not even the Royal family.
Patrick also got rid of the last defense, Warrena's squad which was led by Gil now. The new 2nd in command Sonia betrayed them and they got ambushed and captured.
Here is where it got a bit disappointing, at least for me... Talyn didn't want to listen to the doctors and she lost the baby. But she decided to keep quiet because she was afraid Patrick will leave her if he finds out. One night she goes to his room but overhears him talking to someone. He was planning to launch an attack on the Kingdom now that their main defenses are gone. He then easily persuaded Talyn to join the Empire and be the new Queen. The idiot fell for it ofc...
So Talyn then lured the rest of her family in the dungeon during the attack, and they were all killed down there by Patrick and his soldiers. Talyn was actually happy seeing her sisters get killed, but she didn't know she was next! Patrick then showers her with sweet words only to coldly tell her she will never be a Queen and that he knows she lost the baby. The reason was him, he gave the doctors some kind of abortion pills to give her. As she is shocked he stabs her in the chest with his sword. She curses him until she died. Rip idiot!

So a few days later Warrena gets a a notice that he must come to the Palace by King's order (you can't ignore this or you will become a wanted criminal). The reason stated is that the King died and the 1st Princess the new Ruler wants to make his exile right. He consults his party and decides to go, bringing Ellie, Chloe and Liza with him. When they enter the Palace they notice to much guards and pretty much know something is fishy. In the throne room they find Patrick as the new King. After some back and forth words Warrena easily figures out what is going on... Patrick then gives them an option to join him or to die. Warrena is a bit worried since he basically has to fight alone since Chloe has some kind of pact with the Kingdom which doesn't allow her to fight or harm it's citizens. He decides to fight! Liza defends Ellie who starts praying to cast buffs and heals on Warren as he unleash his Blessing "God of War"! He becomes like a unstoppable killing machine but the side effect is he is losing HP fast. So he mows down all the soldiers and faints...
As he wakes up he finds himself in Ellie's lap. Wondering what happened he looks for Patrick only to see his body splattered on the throne. Chloe tells him the idiot shouted he doesn't care for the Kingdom which broke her pact and she just one shot him with a punch

After that they go to the dungeon to free Gil and his crew, and they find Talyn's body in one of the cells...

And that's it for part 1 of the story. There are 2 more parts, actually 1 and a half... Looks like the author abandoned the WN last year.

Sorry if it's a bit to much but i couldn't skip most of this to give a full picture. If someone who also read the WN finds some mistakes fell free to correct me

Honestly this could be an interesting 'forever one season 12 episodes' anime... If they do it right.

 

[RiffRaffROTFL]

There's zero chance a government banishes a soldier who is basically more powerful than their entire army because one of their princesses is a thot. That would compromise the security of the entire nation.

 

[Sam_Lingdis]

Prolly because this way he can prove his moral superiority in the eyes of the author.

The princess and the king are fucking idiots. How does antagonizing probably the strongest person in the kingdom seem like a smart move?

Imagine she got forced to bed...