Jimi Megane Iinchou ga Koi no Tame ni Card Game de Kakusei suru Hanashi - Oneshot

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Damn this was good.
Also, what a good design the girl has.
Jimiko nerdy girl+lewd outfit is a godsend combo
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I thought it was going to something about S&M but it's just card games.
Okay, fine, her hairdo and mom's slave collar are heavy-handed metaphors about lack of freedom in an oppressive society... but the outfit?! The card with the leather-furry with the whip was... coincidental?
Someone tell me if this is an obvious card game reference or something.
 
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The ending doesn't quite come together in a satisfying way. It would have been better if we saw the boy getting the prize money and his life improving a little, and perhaps a little bit of actual romance between the MC and the boy - like a bit of tension there or something... or heck, it could have just between between her card playing persona and him, rather than her usual self.

Still cute, I'd give it a chance if they made it a serious, though I think they'd either have to move past the card game gimmick and expand out into other games/framing-devices, or they need to really expand on how the card game works, because it feels really underdeveloped right now... though given it's just a oneshot, so it's no surprise.
 
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"ザマス" isn't her name. It's yakuwarigo for rich/elegant women that's a shortening of de gozaimasu.
 

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