Tensei Coliseum: Saijaku Skill de Saikyou no Onna-tachi o Koryaku Shite Dorei Harem Tsukurimasu - Ch. 40

[Grye]

dude hell yeah

 

[Qwaser45]

E

Honestly, I did write it as a joke but I did not expect so many replies from people thinking I was serious.

That’s cause people are already sick of hearing about gay shit. It’s pride month so it’s being shoved everywhere. This manga ain’t gay. Genderbend isn’t trans and isn’t gay. If you want gay manga read yaoi like others said.

 

[nibroc18]

That’s cause people are already sick of hearing about gay shit. It’s pride month so it’s being shoved everywhere. This manga ain’t gay. Genderbend isn’t trans and isn’t gay. If you want gay manga read yaoi like others said.

“This manga ain’t gay” yeah no shit that’s the joke. Besides it wasn’t pride month when I wrote the joke so what are you even blabbering about? Kids these days are such snowflakes…

 

[HelioCesar]

idk but i am feeling he will spare the twins and let them go.

 

[HelioCesar]

I love this manga but its preventing itself from reaching its full potential by having the loser men turn into girls before being fucked instead of staying men and having say gex…

man so many retards thought you were serious, i was a kid when i started reading manga too, but its amazing how many imature and bigot minded people this media attracts

 

[Jstar338]

So, uh, is Fine gonna end up first one pregnant? Because that was supposedly the point of enslaving the loser iirc

this whole coliseum is just eugenics with extra steps

 

[KingOfAllLizards]

This mid shit is still going? Jesus. And, oh look, totally-not-drawn-like-children-on-purpose characters. And, oh look, people defending them with the same washed easily disproven 'uh they're just petite, they look like that in Japan!' crap.

 

[grimmkey]

this whole coliseum is just eugenics with extra steps

Perhaps in intention, but given that a long term winner can suddenly become the loser, the loser can still fight? Seems more like a catch-em-all orgy to some degree, barring the folks who die or run away.

 

[baconcat]

peak shit

Your TS … not so much.

you just lea-
rned

You just learned to line-break "learned" like that, too?

speci-
al

You're special alright.

ungr-
ateful

kni-
ghts

gett-
ing

wo-
rried

fri-
ends

Finee

Fiine

Just … just stop and never touch anything run on electricity ever again.

QC

What check? What quality??

 

[LonelyDarlingUwU]

Your TS … not so much.


You just learned to line-break "learned" like that, too?


You're special alright.










Just … just stop and never touch anything run on electricity ever again.


What check? What quality??

I am a single person working on all this? I have asked for help quite a few times but there are not that many good TS'es out there ^~^, I AM A TL let's not forget that- but of course I will try to learn cause it's not an excuse to let my shit TS pass, so if you could point me to any tutorials or teach me even instead of just being a bitch that would be great! >.< And of course thank you for still reading the chapter
(Akatsuki might have a better TS so you might want to check out their version instead, it should be out in about 3 months I think ^^)

 

[baconcat]

I am a single person working on all this? I have asked for help quite a few times but there are not that many good TS'es out there ^~^, I AM A TL let's not forget that- but of course I will try to learn cause it's not an excuse to let my shit TS pass, so if you could point me to any tutorials or teach me even instead of just being a bitch that would be great! >.< And of course thank you for still reading the chapter
(Akatsuki might have a better TS so you might want to check out their version instead, it should be out in about 3 months I think ^^)

ahdictionary.com. Enter word, follow syllable borders. There, googled it for you.

TS or not, SL or not, shit product is a matter of personal attitude. Doesn't matter whether it's manga SL, shopping list, or job application. Have some fucking standards. Or regular standards, either type should work. I have no beef with your person; I'd knock your TS if it was shit regardless whether you are Lonely, or were Akatsuki, Monty Python, or the University of Chicago Press.
Line-breaking hyphens NEVER go at the start of the next line. There is exactly zero typographic convention to do so, except for very good reasons actually, justifiably overriding simple line-breaking.

 

[LonelyDarlingUwU]

ahdictionary.com. Enter word, follow syllable borders. There, googled it for you.

TS or not, SL or not, shit product is a matter of personal attitude. Doesn't matter whether it's manga SL, shopping list, or job application. Have some fucking standards. Or regular standards, either type should work. I have no beef with your person; I'd knock your TS if it was shit regardless whether you are Lonely, or were Akatsuki, Monty Python, or the University of Chicago Press.
Line-breaking hyphens NEVER go at the start of the next line. There is exactly zero typographic convention to do so, except for very good reasons actually, justifiably overriding simple line-breaking.

TBVH! I usually follow my standard of what let's me fit the text in the bubble and still let it be a little appealing in my eyes, for example "..." they are usally left at the same length as usual text but then i prefer to keep it at '24' if the line distance is at '34', same applies for most other bubbles, i have been recommended that site once before but it usually makes it harder to fit the text or makes it look weird in my eyes, like uneven, while i try to follow the hourglass and sandwich technique in TS most of the times, and sometimes i force it which causes the unusual syllables, and I was not at all offended by your text, it just felt like you could have said it more nicely yk TuT, but still thanks for the suggestions sometimes i get more defensive than usual mostly when i am drunk which i am right now- OHH we are watching the mighty movie in my server right now btw if you wanna join here's a link: https://discord.gg/YG6fVFU7, though not much of the movie is left now >.>

 

[baconcat]

fit the text in the bubble

Bubbles serve the text, not the other way round. Readability is the single most important thing in typesetting, and bubbles are just one tool of many to help facilitate that; in their case to (primarily) provide a calm enough background to have sufficient contrast for text to be readable without eye bleed. It's okay to spill, especially when you have to work with bubbles shaped for a writing system you're not even using. That's why we have this thing called brain that is exceptionally proficient at pattern recognition and gap filling. It's far less of an evil if you have a few letters or punctuation clash with other content than breaking a word in such a stupid place that reading it feels like get slapped halfway through.

could have said it more nicely

I figured you'd be intellectually and emotionally mature enough to be able to tell actual information from hyperbolic embellishment and not measure a message's merit merely by the wordses that might hurtsy-wurtsy your feelie-weelies. (Read: You take the piss, I take the piss. World continues to turn. Also, kick your QC to C some Q. It's literally in the position's name what to do.)

discord

Nah, thanks, I can't stand Discord, and I'm too lazy to commit to anything beyond yelling at people over stupid shit they did. I learnt to tell, so you can, too. Either way, remember this is a hobby of yours. Don't let it become a chore. Do it because you're having fun and pride in your product; don't feel like compromising to meet some imaginary deadline and end up releasing something like this entirely preventable trainwreck by KittyBlue.

 

[DMKnight]

[Todo JJK Crying GIF]

 

[Qwaser45]

man so many retards thought you were serious, i was a kid when i started reading manga too, but its amazing how many imature and bigot minded people this media attracts

The people ur kissing ass to would ban this manga if they had the chance. It would be labeled misogynist wish fulfillment for pedophiles. Also pro slavery as well. All those chicks with the septum piercings who hate “bigots” are the same ones online who tear manga like this a new a-hole in tons of comment sections.