I thought it was funny because of the extra absurdity though!I've never seen a horror-yuri I didn't like, this one looks cute as well
One thing that took me out a little bit: the "Call 911!" on page 13. You don't have to localize that. She's not american, she has no reason to say that. I would've just went with "Call the police!" or something like that.
Mm, that's fair. Went ahead and changed the wording in that bubble to "call the cops." Thanks for the feedback. bO.OI've never seen a horror-yuri I didn't like, this one looks cute as well
One thing that took me out a little bit: the "Call 911!" on page 13. You don't have to localize that. She's not american, she has no reason to say that. I would've just went with "Call the police!" or something like that.
I actually realized there's a more accurate and funnier way to word that last line... it's even crazier, in the particular context of being overheard in a bathroom. >.>Crazy thing to say in the toilet lol