Danshi Kinsei Game Sekai de Ore ga Yaru Beki Yuiitsu no Koto - Yuri no Aida ni Hasamaru Otoko Toshite Tensei Shite Shimaimashita - Ch. 16

[MangaDex]

 

[nobody2002]

I'm not usually one to complain, but that translation was a little rough. Some of the conversations didn't flow very smoothly.

 

[ImAFuckinNerd]

My guy, if you're gonna snipe a series, you need to have better quality than this.
Especially because it hasn't even been 2 months since the previous scanlation by Lid scans. And they had really good quality scans.
Tl;dr - This ain't a good look king.

 

[lemon-dono]

ugh, another garbage MTL. Blocked.

 

[nono177013]

You could not have butchered up the pronouns more than this lol

 

[Knighto]

besides the problem with the TL

didn't the MC thought the Hero was almost as strong as him? so how come he could stop them both, I mean he has been training but would't say enough to pull a move like that YET.

 

[BlackSword]

My guy, if you're gonna snipe a series, you need to have better quality than this.
Especially because it hasn't even been 2 months since the previous scanlation by Lid scans. And they had really good quality scans.
Tl;dr - This ain't a good look king.

Our version will be released soon. We had cleaning and redraw issues, including a complete loss of the clean files.

 

[Divine_Failure]

SNOW IS THE BEST GIRL AND NO ONE CAN SAY OTHERWISE

 

[Divine_Failure]

Ngl im having trouble understanding this translation. old translation was better

 

[VooXoo]

It seems like the translator put out this scans because the original team stopped, unfortunately is clearly MTL from the cut bubbles, mismatched pronouns and missing flow in the words, I've seen other MTL and when the font here is better than them the quality of the text is the same.
It can be fixed with some proofreading, but without knowing the plot or how this kind of stories go it would still fill a bit weird, but this TL lacks even that.

 

[manpersonbob]

Dogshit translation. Gtfo of here with this half assed crap

 

[Mentholatum]

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Things I should do in a male-dominated game world

How can you mess up the translation of the series title this badly?

 

[sigmaboyzzshinobu]

Ik ts for free but come on man at least get the title right