Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu - Ch. 291 - An Over-the-Top Relationship

[MangaDex]

 

[assembly79]

This is confusing 😅

So 290.1 with "Revised Edition" is canon but 291.1 also with "Revision Edition" is a scrapped one? What does "Revised Edition" mean, then?

 

[BanzaiYuri]

Need to move the retconned chapters to a new folder and out of the canon 😭

 

[GG_Mongrel]

 

[Diejia24]

So this is like a re-revision? 😭

 

[dimox]

The... heck?

 

[Dionaea]

In the end, the sensei in most trouble across all timelines was Kisa-sensei all along.

 

[Xavier881]

For all those confused, the artist kisa has decided to change the story a bit because he couldnt think of a way to continue, in mangadex the canon story progression goes like this. From chapter 289, chapter 290.1, 291.2, 292.1 and then it goes normally

 

[dimox]

Sorry, but honestly, this is actually insanely confusing as the chapter titles and the order currently do not reflect what's scrapped and what's the actual route and what's revised but also scrapped. Please, may I suggest to clean this mess up?

@BB-62:
I'm not one to complain easily and I know this is not you guys fault but kissa's mess, but... for my sanity I'll ask anyway. Could you consider to:

1. Create a single combined chapter for the original scrapped route
That is: 290 "An Over the Top Relationship" + 291 "Show begins" & 291.5 "Kuroki Erika questioned" (the incomplete draft)
Please put all the original chapter panels in order in one single chapter, name that 290-EX Scrapped Route [non canon] and put a fitting explanatory page in there telling everyone that the content was scrapped by author and thus is non-canon, but worth keeping. It should be considered a "what-if" omake or something.

and then, once the dust has settled, remove the misleading decimal numbering and order the chapters correctly. I would also suggest that @Geako removes that revision notice once all is done.

Because otherwise this is just a pain in the rear and right now I feel like failling a sanity check.

 

[Tomzai]

How exactly is this chart supposed to be read?
Are all of these chapters considered canon? If so, why does it need to be even mentioned?
Do the dotted lines imply the chapters fall under the one above them?
Why is pre-revision chapter labeled revision?

Bonk the one responsible with a comically large cartoon hammer and grab your proofreader and tell them they got work to do.

 

[ZanHail]

Any chance the non-canon chapters be moved to it's own page or something? This is way too confusing now.

 

[Pumpki]

Agreed with everyone else, confused af with this ordering.

That being said, thank you for the translations and trying to make it as coherent as possible!

 

[JethroBodine]

Yeah I'm in agreement that some stuff needs to be moved into a separate volume or something.

Also, my girl Kana! Once again thinking of others instead of her own meager self. And NTR classmate is back!

 

[Kurusou]

Sorry, but honestly, this is actually insanely confusing as the chapter titles and the order currently do not reflect what's scrapped and what's the actual route and what's revised but also scrapped. Please, may I suggest to clean this mess up?

@BB-62:
I'm not one to complain easily and I know this is not you guys fault but kissa's mess, but... for my sanity I'll ask anyway. Could you consider to:

1. Create a single combined chapter for the original scrapped route
That is: 290 "An Over the Top Relationship" + 291 "Show begins" & 291.5 "Kuroki Erika questioned" (the incomplete draft)
Please put all the original chapter panels in order in one single chapter, name that 290-EX Scrapped Route [non canon] and put a fitting explanatory page in there telling everyone that the content was scrapped by author and thus is non-canon, but worth keeping. It should be considered a "what-if" omake or something.

and then, once the dust has settled, remove the misleading decimal numbering and order the chapters correctly. I would also suggest that @Geako removes that revision notice once all is done.

Because otherwise this is just a pain in the rear and right now I feel like failling a sanity check.

dont worry im confused also

 

[UrbanSing]

"The baby making would be legendary" ✍️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

 

[LTalon]

Yeah I'm in agreement that some stuff needs to be moved into a separate volume or something.

Also, my girl Kana! Once again thinking of others instead of her own meager self. And NTR classmate is back!

Yeah, Kana likes Sou like everyone else, but she doesn't seem to mind sharing AT ALL. Kind of the "this is amazing, and I think everyone else should experience it too!"

 

[FrigusAvis]

291.1 gone while I was in the middle of piecing it all together...

 

[dimox]

Yeah, Kana likes Sou like everyone else, but she doesn't seem to mind sharing AT ALL. Kind of the "this is amazing, and I think everyone else should experience it too!"

Kanaria is something else, indeed. She's an Ojou-sama but she does volunteer work as a hobby. She's a caring one how I see it and she's probably the woman Sou needs the most by his side if he wants a stable, safe future. Because she's less possesive compared to most girls and she even cares about the others. Kanaria has the willingness to support them and also the financial means to make ends meet. Ideally. with her as his wife, Sou could enjoy himself and focus on making women around him happy while Kanaria manages his life and wellbeing.

 

[Tanaka_Taro]

Man, when you guys talked about the differences from the last rewriting in the "The Raging Sisters" thread, I thought you were just talking about the X / Niconico raws. I didn't notice at all that it had already been translated, lol.

IIUC, only the canon chapters are here now, so "level 1 pervert" is still canon and precedes this chapter. But the transition from "you are small fry compared to my family and especially my oneesan!" to completely focusing on Erika, and so directly leaving the family out after involving them, feels a little jarring. Maybe it's just the influence of the previous version, with the very fitting little debate about female molesters' habits.

Sou directly and decisively involving all the guards is pretty cool. It makes it feel like he's trying his best to prepare the ground to be epically saved against a serious threat, instead of focusing only on the seduced & abandoned background story like before.

Hinata's "I'm getting dragged into this...?!" is super cute! Every harem deserves a funny and super-positive ojou-sama like Kana-chan! And Miku is, well, Miku I guess.

 

[zigzagzoot]

Man, when you guys talked about the differences from the last rewriting in the "The Raging Sisters" thread, I thought you were just talking about the X / Niconico raws. I didn't notice at all that it had already been translated, lol.

IIUC, only the canon chapters are here now, so "level 1 pervert" is still canon and precedes this chapter. But the transition from "you are small fry compared to my family and especially my oneesan!" to completely focusing on Erika, and so directly leaving the family out after involving them, feels a little jarring. Maybe it's just the influence of the previous version, with the very fitting little debate about female molesters' habits.

Sou directly and decisively involving all the guards is pretty cool. It makes it feel like he's trying his best to prepare the ground to be epically saved against a serious threat, instead of focusing only on the seduced & abandoned background story like before.

Hinata's "I'm getting dragged into this...?!" is super cute! Every harem deserves a funny and super-positive ojou-sama like Kana-chan! And Miku is, well, Miku I guess.

Now that only the canon chapters are left, I think we have a decent chapter flow again and the confusion has gone away.