Pokemon: Ouja no Saiten - Ch. 20 - The Queen of Ice and a Fiery Spirit

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Thanks for the chapter~

Also, congrats on helping work with the official English translation, hyped for when it comes out.

Only really noticed two errors

Page 24 bottom panel, Red's speech bubble, minor grammatical error?
"possible survive" > "possibly survive"

Page 37 Blue's though bubble is completely empty.
 
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I don't think I got everything, but after one quick lookover:

* Page 21 - Misty should say "Realized what?" to match Red's word tense.

* Page 28 - Not sure if this was a change in the translation, but Green said something different in Chapter 13 (https://mangadex.org/chapter/4b209c49-017e-4b8e-8dac-e87252460176/24).

* Page 36 - One of the speech bubbles isn't filled in

* Page 37 - Thought bubble left empty

* Page 39 - For some reason used "Lorelai" instead of "Lorelei"

* Page 44 - Used "Laprus" instead of "Lapras"

* Page 48 - Not wrong per se, but I'll leave it up to you if you want Daisy Oak to also call Red's mom "mom".

All other stuff I've seen are simple punctuation (i.e. not ending sentences with periods) and omitting words (ex. a few instances where "it's" would fit), though I didn't do a thorough lookover, but all in all this was a fun read and congrats on working on the official English release!
 
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I don't think I got everything, but after one quick lookover:

* Page 21 - Misty should say "Realized what?" to match Red's word tense.

* Page 28 - Not sure if this was a change in the translation, but Green said something different in Chapter 13 (https://mangadex.org/chapter/4b209c49-017e-4b8e-8dac-e87252460176/24).

* Page 36 - One of the speech bubbles isn't filled in

* Page 37 - Thought bubble left empty

* Page 39 - For some reason used "Lorelai" instead of "Lorelei"

* Page 44 - Used "Laprus" instead of "Lapras"

* Page 48 - Not wrong per se, but I'll leave it up to you if you want Daisy Oak to also call Red's mom "mom".

All other stuff I've seen are simple punctuation (i.e. not ending sentences with periods) and omitting words (ex. a few instances where "it's" would fit), though I didn't do a thorough lookover, but all in all this was a fun read and congrats on working on the official English release!
Also not sure if this is something wrong, but the translation of “ice pellet” on page 49 feels slightly off because no such move exists in pokemon. It mightve been ice shard, but if it’s the exact one to one translation then cant complain, just sounded a little weird

Also, cant the e4 win without hitting OHKO moves? This is the second times it’s happened, though it does exaplain that the e4 pokemon are probably much higher level than other trainers
 
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Also not sure if this is something wrong, but the translation of “ice pellet” on page 49 feels slightly off because no such move exists in pokemon. It mightve been ice shard, but if it’s the exact one to one translation then cant complain, just sounded a little weird

Also, cant the e4 win without hitting OHKO moves? This is the second times it’s happened, though it does exaplain that the e4 pokemon are probably much higher level than other trainers
I meant Ice Shard, oops lol.
 
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Official English release? Holy shit let's go? I gotta keep an eye out for that. Also Lorelei please freeze me. Poor Snorlax jobbing immediately like that; it's always the big boys who gotta go down ;_; I hope Pikachu gets a Light Ball. Maybe it'll electrocute a Thunder Stone into one.
 
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Pg. 41: Lorelei's spelled as Lorelai for much of it
Pg. 54: I assume that Snorlax isn't narrating, so "I" shouldn't be used.
Pg. 57: Same situation with "me".
 

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