Natori to Shizuha - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Coming Apart

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I don't want to dump all the chapters I've done at once for various reasons, not least that 1) I get very self-conscious about having made mistakes, and 2) I have RL things I need to give my time to as well.

The speech at the start was probably the hardest bit this time around, though I'm fairly sure it's "correct".

Also, for anyone who's wondering, having read 10 chapters no, it's not full-blown yuri yet, but - as you can probably tell if you've just gone through this chapter - if it was up on Dynasty it'd get the #subtext tag at the very least. I would definitely say it's over in A Love Yet to Bloom's corner of the market - slow burn and character development (though it's way more "about" high school judo than ALYtB is "about" writing, and it occasionally gets quite a bit goofier). Still, it does seem like it's taking the two leads' relationship relatively seriously, to the point it feels like it'd be a shame if they stayed Just Good Friends. But we'll see where exactly the mangaka wants to go with it, I guess.

EDIT: Urk, missed a page there in the initial upload. Fixing it now, though it might take a few minutes for it to stick.
 
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Would the "rival" be considered a Kuudere, and the MC a Tsundere?
 

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