Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu (Fan Colored) - Vol. 4 Ch. 249 - Kaede Kakizaki Takes Flight

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This chapter is was huge. This chapter is like 4 chapters together. I know I worked a lot on this chapter, but It will get very less interaction. Some how no tracker follow my recolour. Even on those hosted by web-scrapers they follow original one. Somehow internet databases overlooked My work completely. 😭

At first I thought it was joke as a chapter but now after chapter 300, I feel it's more like documentary. Like how men are exploited by women and how their life is toy. Like Women use and throw them. Kaki faced the horrible reality of 1:39 world in her fantasy.

But more than that it's critique of men on our real world. The feeling of Kakizaki is the yearning of Men feel in this world, where Ideal women are so less, a loving one is rare.

I wish all girls and men in this manga a happy life.

This chapters has many clean bangers.

This with ideal fantasy of Kakizaki Kaede.
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I changed the page 20 a little, "I want power".
 
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Kisa sensei is on break. He had not made any R18 for last two months and he was focused to complete volume 5 ie chapter 300.

Now he will focus on R18 for this month. So, a long work.
 
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Kisa sensei is on break. He had not made any R18 for last two months and focused to complete volume 5 ie chapter 300.

Now he will focus on R18 for this month. So, a long work.
Oh wow, it's been a long since the R18 series was updated.
This chapter is was huge. This chapter is like 4 chapters together.
No wonder her delulu was so long lol
 
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Even though she's not my top girl, Kaede is truly the most based wife who knows ball about isekai trash. Apparently she's a little into NTR too?

30 pages of truly impressive Delulu.

Rude to reduce Hinata and Kana to Desuwa and Pero Pero though.
 
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The most difficult page was the third one, I guess...
Damn, all those details. And the text... I wouldn't even know how and where to start and just give up coloring that.

Great work, as expected. Your "I NEED POWER" version got really nice. I would suggest some small corrections to text coloring in a few places, like adjusting the color of one or two colons and such, but I'll leave it at that, it's not important.

But one thing got lost and that's their aura on this page... see the original in comparison.

In addition, if you fix that, please also look at page 18, the first text block which reads:
I lost to the former guard students who had turned into [Pervert Female Aura] ...
Now, that sounds pretty weird. I know it's the original TL, but that's gotta be wrong. A person cannot turn into an aura. So this would either mean they turn into someone/something (i.e. "perverted females" or "female perverts") or they would turn on their perverted aura (like releasing or activating it). Not sure what the original text says, but logically it should be either:
students who had turned into [Female Perverts] ...
or
students who had turned on their [Pervert Female Aura] ...
...or alternatively use something like "released their" aura, which sounds even better. I would suggest to correct that part.

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Rude to reduce Hinata and Kana to Desuwa and Pero Pero though.
I wholeheartly agree. This is inacceptable, inexcusable, intolerable, Indefensible, impermissible, insufferable... ❌💢🚫
Poor Kana...

Hehe, as for the content. Since this is Kaede's dream, we now know how she wants to be hugged. And certainly, snuggling up with her like that should feel nice given how squishy she is.

But no matter how powerful Kaede became. In the end she still lost to Sou's Gae Bolg...
 
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The most difficult page was the third one, I guess...
Damn, all those details. And the text... I wouldn't even know how and where to start and just give up coloring that.

Great work, as expected. Your "I NEED POWER" version got really nice. I would suggest some small corrections to text coloring in a few places, like adjusting the color of one or two colons and such, but I'll leave it at that, it's not important.

But one thing got lost and that's their aura on this page... see the original in comparison.
I have made that aura, but forgot make that layer visible. It was mistake.

In addition, if you fix that, please also look at page 18, the first text block which reads:

Now, that sounds pretty weird. I know it's the original TL, but that's gotta be wrong. A person cannot turn into an aura. So this would either mean they turn into someone/something (i.e. "perverted females" or "female perverts") or they would turn on their perverted aura (like releasing or activating it). Not sure what the original text says, but logically it should be either:

I changed it , now it may look better.

Hehe, as for the content. Since this is Kaede's dream, we now know how she wants to be hugged. And certainly, snuggling up with her like that should feel nice given how squishy she is.

But no matter how powerful Kaede became. In the end she still lost to Sou's Gae Bolg...

Kaede has personal Sou's sama ASMR, She already on level S.


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This chapters has so many nice panels.

But This miku panel is superb. It describes why Sou is so obsessed with her.

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But the next page which shows Miku's Madness is insane. Her Eyes shows insanity.

The most difficult page was the third one, I guess...
Nah, It was fine. I just reused from chapter 247, The identical panel was in Aya's dream. This manga has many panels reused.
I wholeheartly agree. This is inacceptable, inexcusable, intolerable, Indefensible, impermissible, insufferable... ❌💢🚫
Poor Kana...

I think Author would have tired of making long chapters, so he had cut some script there. Yet, she was great in her small role.

Now volume 4 is almost complete.
 
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The Kaede delulu sure is on another level. Even Miku could only imagine herself as wife, but Kaede isekai'd herself to a whole nother world. Thanks for your work on this chapter, it really was a whole journey. And yeah, the situation of women in this world in a sense depicts and critiques male loneliness in our world. Ironically now that I think about it, the core of the comedy of the story is that the girls are too cultured to directly ask Sou out...maybe a critique of the reader for men too restrained to ask women out?
 
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Ironically now that I think about it, the core of the comedy of the story is that the girls are too cultured to directly ask Sou out
Well, in that kind of world it makes sense that girls restrain themselves - It's not really comparable to our world and how you'd normally think they should behave. They just can't. Because the roles are not simply reversed, the issue is the gender imbalance as a set parameter which affects norms, laws and society as a whole. From an onlooker's perspective it's funny to watch their antics but when you actually think about it, that world is a doomed dystopia.

I thought about how I'd react if the goddess wanted to reincarnate me into that world. Would I want to be a guy or a girl? Truth be told, I wouldn't want to be born over there at all... being male seems exhausting, being female nothing but frustrating. Even if it's "getting swapped" like Sou - no, it wouldn't excite me too much. Sure, sounds fun at the beginning, but in the end I'd join normal Sou in wanting a girlfriend (= wife). That is ONE, and yes, maybe two but really, that's it. No matter how nice or super cute these girls are - and heck they are - they'd exhaust me and more than two would rob me of my sanity and health.

But This miku panel is superb. It describes by Sou is so obsessed with her.
It certainly is, yes...
 

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