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That lazy senpai remind me of the lazy senpai from Houkago Teibou Nisshi, but her hair keeps distracting me, is like one of her sides got burn in an experiment? lol
We got maids, this is the true treasure but we need UNIVERSITY MAIDS TOO
pg16 top right panel: "don't do it on other people place like this"
pg16 top left panel: "are you doing slime" -> "doing" is awkward and seems like a direct mtl of やる, "making" or "playing with" fits the context better
pg16 middle right panel: "you should do it too" -> same as above
pg17 top right panel: "you search for quartz from inside this" -> "you search for quartz in this (pile)"
pg21 middle panel: "what with that" -> "what's with that?"
pg23 middle left panel: "seems like it would bring good" (missing "luck")
pg24 top left panel: "see the antarcticite bigger" rephrase
some of the dialogue TLs feel pretty stilted or unnatural overall