Qǐng Qīfu Wǒ ba, Èyì Xiǎojiě! - Vol. 13 Ch. 173 - Yvonne and Dorothee

[MangaDex]

 

[Pathro640808]

hmmmm intresting ...... intresting i say

 

[smormu]

This chapter is quite short and vague

 

[polysylvester]

I just don't like the inclusion of Dorothee after her introduction. The OG concept is just a future Elsa going back to save her lover, but now she's a fucking interdimentional timekeeper to save the gang. Also I feel like the concept of the "game" is kinda gone without much explanation and we got Circe and everything, the plot feels directionless and dragged out.

 

[GLFanatic]

You're not sacrificing Bey-Bey for your schemes, Dorothee! But, my God! What legs you have... She is just a child, you monster! Seriously, I can see you never skip leg-day... She deserves to live an innocent happy life with her mothers! Just like your legs deserve to be worshiped in an official religion... Leave that family alone! And it shall be called "Legihism".

 

[godzilla1987653]

Evil Elsa is back!!!

 

[Mahuta18]

when you're doomed yuri but your gf got that 33,550,336 retries

 

[www_Wind]

She is using beybey as a device to suppress Evie's curse? Wtf gng 😭😭

 

[mekrabbat]

"Also, be glad that this isn't one of the cycles that I gave in to the frustration and despair and went full sociopath."

 

[maeribaeri]

Hm... I am not 100% buying this yet.
I have a suspicion that this is Dorothee playing up her "dark" side, possibly to force Evie's hand to do something, or to guide her towards some conclusion/conviction.
She knows Evie well enough to understand that she would never choose to sacrifice a child for her own health, so I feel like rather than as a tool, Dorothee might use Beybey as a hostage, to make Evie go along with some kind of plan of hers.

 

[Riedone]

What a twist

 

[AnglicAshes]

Welp can't say if she turns out to be the 'game master' but this is going somewhere...

Thanks for the TL

 

[0ps]

Traitor!!!

 

[TheRealDrMcCoy]

Don't do anything to beybey

 

[WolfenLady]

I know she lost her Evie but that's still messed up. Dorothee, get a hold on yourself girl! Your Yvonne would be rightfully crossed with you if she could see you.

 

[TanyaTheEvil]

This was such a heartbreaking chapter seeing Elsie like this. Thank goodness for BeyBey. I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the chapter and translation

 

[Redrot]

Maybe you should have arranged for more lesbian sex with your girlfriend instead, Dorothee. Ever thought about that?

Thanks for the translation!

 

[arcosapphire]

I just don't like the inclusion of Dorothee after her introduction. The OG concept is just a future Elsa going back to save her lover, but now she's a fucking interdimentional timekeeper to save the gang. Also I feel like the concept of the "game" is kinda gone without much explanation and we got Circe and everything, the plot feels directionless and dragged out.

There's plenty of good stuff in the recent plot, but I agree that things got pretty convoluted. The story is nothing like what it was in the beginning. And sometimes that's good, as things naturally evolve and characters develop, but I do think it lacks cohesion in this case.

Time travel is also just very narratively messy. Unless a story is about time travel (e.g. Steins;Gate), it's better if it isn't introduced. Once time travel is possible, what does anything matter? It can later be made not to have happened.

Likewise, alternate versions of characters are messy, unless it's a focus of the plot. Using tropes like that just as a minor tool in a plot is hard to swallow.