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    Chronicles of Narnia: The Magician's Nephew

    This is both my favorite book in the Chronicles of Narnia, and as the tag points out technically Isekai. I have absolutely no reason not to love this, so I desperately hope when I get a chance to read it later it doesn't manage to change my mind.
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    Keikenchi Chochiku de Nonbiri Shoushin Ryokou ~Yuusha to Koibito ni Tsuihou sareta Senshi no Mujikaku zama~

    The manga reads a bit like cliff notes of the story itself. Conflicts are usually presented and resolved in a manner of 2-3 panels, the characters seem to blow through development without any care at all, and the stakes for strength are removed from the table almost immidietly. Don't get me...
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    Dimensional Mercenary

    Does anybody know the story behind the Aomori apple that he is referring to? I can find many references online about the prefecture, it's apples, and how highly sought after they are, but I'm not finding anything regarding a sales technique or hurricanes. I like in these cliff-hangers to try and...
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    Kumo Desu ga, Nani ka? Daily Life of the Four Spider Sisters

    @IrregularPerson I think that is one of those "artifacting" aspects from it changing slightly between the web and light novel. In the web novel, it was hilarious, as it was a way for her to have these great self-deprecating conversations when there were literally no other speaking characters...
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    Kumo Desu ga, Nani ka?

    The sisters have returned!
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    Joou Heika no Isekai Strategy

    I've personally no problem with the translation credits being a part of the front page so long as it's not detracting from the art/story. Those kinds of art pages are almost always covered in huge fucking letters either about the series or other stuff in the magazine it's running in, so I...
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    Tensei Goblin dakedo Shitsumon aru?

    I don't mind rehashing of good stories, being inspired by elements, and wanting to write if they were together is an interesting writing experiment to me. That being the case, maybe don't make it point for point the start of another series right down to a computer like voice granting them skills...
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    Yuusha-sama no Osananajimi to Iu Settei no Make Heroine ni Tensei shita no de, Chougoushi ni Job Change Shimasu

    I'm usually a huge one for giving constructive feedback, but honestly, you have me a bit stumped on this one. If there is any advice to give that you haven't already adopted it is likely beyond my scope. That being the case, thanks for picking this up. I hope to continue enjoying your work for...
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    Kumo Desu ga, Nani ka? Daily Life of the Four Spider Sisters

    @Sevens mentally the separated when she tried to use a mental attack on , and . Still reaching that second one in the web-novel personally though, so I don't know if it's slightly different in that one. The event that I am at in the light novel happened after that point in the web-novel though...
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    Egao No Taenai Shokuba Desu

    That assistant is way too into her own head. Like she just immediately assumed that because she doesn't have talent for the aspect of manga that isn't present in her current works, that she cannot do it at all. Honestly, if she just turned her "One off scenarios" into a 4-koma setting it would...
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    Isekai Munchkin -HP 1 no Mama de Saikyou Saisoku Danjon Kouryaku-

    @Sekiryuutei134 I agree, you should continue doing it. The translation quality isn't bad at all, and having someone with insight into DnD will probably help contextualize a lot of the dialogue that might be lost on others. In regards to explaining mechanics, I would just leave a link to the 5e...
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    Tensei Shitara Ore ga Heroine de Aitsu ga Yuusha Datta

    Feels heavily rushed. I hope further chapters give jokes a bit more time to breathe. At the moment it feels like they set up a joke, then just move on to another set up over and over again without a payout. That, and something to get hooked in. Right now it is relying on solely comedy because...
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    Doukutsu Ou kara Hajimeru Rakuen Life ~Bannou no Saikutsu Skill de Saikyou ni!?~

    The first chapter didn't really have much of a hook, so I was worried that it wouldn't have legs to stand on, but already from chapter 2 I am starting to get invested in the future and development of both the land and the creatures there-in. I suppose a larger cast of characters than just the...
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    Party kara Tsuihou Sareta Sono Chiyushi, Jitsu wa Saikyou Nitsuki

    I will say, the translation was a bit hard to follow. I think there are several situations were there was a nuance of what they were saying that wasn't properly conveyed, which this manga is particularly vulnerable to since it seems a central theme is going to be around the main character not...
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    Ichioku-nen Button o Renda Shita Ore wa, Kizuitara Saikyou ni Natteita: Rakudai Kenshi no Gakuin Musou

    I really hope they lean into the insanity aspect of this. It feels like he lost his mind entirely after a few thousand years, though he didn't seem to mature at all. Possibly this is due to the "If I concentrate I can make the flow of time speed up" bit, but without proper explanation, it just...
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    Konjiki no Word Master: Yuusha Yonin ni Makikomareta Unique Cheat

    Characters like this always make me wonder if they are asexual. You would never really know because they wouldn't really state their sexual preferences very often if they were, but Hiiro certainly doesn't seem to have any inclination towards anybody. I can never even tell if I were to like it...
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    Isekai Munchkin -HP 1 no Mama de Saikyou Saisoku Danjon Kouryaku-

    My main complaint is that the inspiration obviously comes from tabletop games, and where that has no inherent issue, I think the creator is struggling to figure out where he wants the balance between being faithful to that world and system and his own blend. To give one example would be that...
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    Shinigami ni Sodaterareta Shoujo wa Shikkoku no Tsurugi wo Mune ni Idaku

    It's not about being entitled, it's the fact that everybody seemingly does it. For two straight days, there tends to be nothing to read because everybody is so busy pranking people. 2 straight days of getting your hopes up when one of your favorite series updated, only to be repeatedly...
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    Tensei shitara Otome Game no Sekai? Ie, Majutsu wo Kiwameru no ni Isogashii no de sou iu no wa Kekkou desu

    I don't think I will ever enjoy this tradition. Especially because of the time-zone difference, it really just tends to feel like "oh, well this is going on again, guess there is nothing to read for another few days." Especially now of all times having nothing to read for several days freaking...
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    Mairimashita! Iruma-kun

    I really hate to say it, cause I really do otherwise love this manga anyways, but I like new-Iruma better. The personality change turned him into one of my favorite kind of protagonist, and the show that he isn't really different in his core values but is just handling them differently is really...
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