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    Rekishi ni Nokoru Akujo ni Naruzo: Akuyaku Reijou ni Naru hodo Ouji no Dekiai wa Kasoku Suru you desu! - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

    It seems this is the crucial flaw for nearly every reijou stories. The villainess got hated by everyone, which supposed to be the heroine's role to take. I mean the ones in Katarina is make sense because that Cambel girl hated by nobles and people are licking Katarina's shoes. The villainess are...
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    I Became an Evolving Space Monster - Ch. 12

    I don't see the point to further continued this arguement, that's all. You seems to have specific demand in your mind, and I think it's fine to accept any imperfection since it's not under my control. That's why writing your own story is the only way if you're really that nitpicking in other's...
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    Rekishi ni Nokoru Akujo ni Naruzo: Akuyaku Reijou ni Naru hodo Ouji no Dekiai wa Kasoku Suru you desu! - Vol. 2 Ch. 7

    I suspect that this will turn into the most annoying cult type story. I just hate this kind of cult, but I'd want to see what our MC would do with all her skills.
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    I Became an Evolving Space Monster - Ch. 12

    Well that's how companion/mascot works. Need the perfect story? Write your own.
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    Savage Fang Ojou-sama: Shijou Saikyou no Youhei wa Shijou Sai Kyou no Bougyaku Reijou to Natte Futatabime no Sekai o Musou Suru - Vol. 3 Ch. 20

    The underlying plot is interesting, but the presentation is just boring. To hell with preaching and arguing.
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    I Became an Evolving Space Monster - Ch. 12

    Who knows? At least the focal point of the weakness is cannot cooperate with anyone. Though the guy was rather weak early on until he got evolved once. I know that it's kinda deleted the point of "weak start", but it's already stated that it's impossible in the first stage of evolution to fight...
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    Savage Fang Ojou-sama: Shijou Saikyou no Youhei wa Shijou Sai Kyou no Bougyaku Reijou to Natte Futatabime no Sekai o Musou Suru - Vol. 2 Ch. 12

    This kind of pointless "mercy" is made manga not as fun as manhwa. I'd stab this guy's wrist the first time he tried to grab the sword to fight back after he fell.
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    The Ragweed Princess from the Empire of Livitium - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

    I see the premise now, so I'll continued reading. The pace is good when you could see the direction since chapter 4 like this. Though it's forgivable for shorter chapters to be around chapter 10.
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    Isekai de Haishin Katsudou wo Shitara Tairyou no Yandere Shinja wo Umidashite Shimatta Ken - Vol. 2 Ch. 18

    I thought it'd be rather scary manga, but it's just a romcom. Well I'm glad it's like this lol
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    Isekai de Haishin Katsudou wo Shitara Tairyou no Yandere Shinja wo Umidashite Shimatta Ken - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    The only thing I remembered the entire chapter is Maria's butt.
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    Otome Game no Hametsu Flag shika nai Akuyaku Reijou ni Tensei shite shimatta... Zettai Zetsumei! Hametsu Sunzen Hen - Vol. 3 Ch. 19 - Everyone's feel…

    I finally understand why I stopped reading the main manga, it's too freaking bright. Look at my Suya's sunglasses, it's too bright so she's crying.
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    Teisou Gyakuten Sekai no Doutei Henkyou Ryoushu Kishi - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - My Dick Hurts

    I feel you dude, that must be so much pain.
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    I Became an Evolving Space Monster - Ch. 12

    You must confused real armor with plot armor. You could find good explanation for why laser guns are not as strong as fists on something. Kumoko is super bad example because the vibe is far different. This one is supposedly the ultimate predator which even killed his own kins while Kumoko is...
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    Dungeon ni Hisomu Yandere na Kanojo ni Ore wa Nando mo Korosareru - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    Wasting time on human trash villains and similarly trash MC on pitiful girl that's too kind for this shitty world. The following chapters also stupid, brute forcing to break the mold is not something interesting to read. It's like you write a story about only killing slimes but you only write...
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    Sasensareta Munou Ouji wa Jitsuryoku wo Kakushitai - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

    This should be included in the first chapter to complete the premise, but fine either way.
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    I Became an Evolving Space Monster - Ch. 12

    The whole thing is power fantasy already, but let me convince you on one thing here. A hole is only appear when something got penetrated. So why would the MC got a bunch of holes? We're talking about super tough outer shells right here. Surely the MC won't just goes unharmed, but there is no...
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    Horobi no Kuni no Seifukusha - Vol. 2 Ch. 6 - Gowk's Will

    This is trying to justified the execution of that guy. In the war time, it's possible to execute deserted soldiers. So this guy doesn't need to be more justified to be executed. Poor mob soldier A-kun
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    Horobi no Kuni no Seifukusha - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - A Distant War

    Japanese seems to be fine marrying the first cousin idea huh? I've seen a lot of people saying that it must be at least second counsin to be able to get married. In my country, even third and fourth cousin are still considered as relative and therefore cannot get married.
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    I Became an Evolving Space Monster - Ch. 12

    not 0, he got shot several times. Though most of the time he could dodge, and that's emphasized how fast he is.
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    Tonari no Seki-kun Junior - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    Kinda interest how she got this child ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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