I'm not sure if the artist lacked skill, but the knight seems sus and not at the same time. The expression isn't telling enough story. I mean normally we'd already see "I am the bad guy here" or something similar.
I hate patent no matter world it is.
Seems the TL got quite some track record eh? Well that's suck. I hope everything ended well for everyone. I just don't care enough for this or that. If I do care, I'd study Japanese and read raw instead of whining about TL suck.
I'll be honest here. This manga is like a fast food that somehow delicious enough to eat, but something is missing. Surely it has everything, but stuffs feel fake and superficial. The author seems to try very hard to make the story popular and got many kind of adaptations like become a mobile...
I don't know what kind of manga you guys had been reading thus far, but this is amongst one of the good ones. It's a shame that the TL lost interest in this manga. Hope someone would pick this up. It's freaking cliffhanger too.
I want to tell the author that this story don't even need the part which "being in otome game's world". I know it's just an easy way out, but the story alone is interesting enough to be its own way.
Despite being short, the pacing is good. It's also a good finale for this kind of setting. If only those many short manga could do with this pacing too, there would be so many good manga to read.