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  1. Pokebat

    Gyaru Who Becomes Menhera After 10 Days - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - Day 5

    you might need to mispell zurikishi as zurikisi
  2. Pokebat

    Gyaru Who Becomes Menhera After 10 Days - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - Day 5

    It's more like I made her sound too proper the like "you can stay at my house" could be changed to "you stay over" which fit her character better and conveys the same information. The lines "It was easy to understand what your explanations." and "You're really good at teaching." were swapped...
  3. Pokebat

    Gyaru Who Becomes Menhera After 10 Days - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - Day 5

    I didn't spend much time proofreading this chapter so that may be it.
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    Gyaru That Becomes Menhera After 10 Days - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Day 4

    Are you talking about 'Menhera Gyaru Will Confess in 10 Days' in which case yes but that was the sequel to this Yeah, that question come up a lot and your comment was the most accurate for how this story uses the word. Also thanks for telling me it is spelled menhera 'cause I was saying it...
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