Gyaru Who Becomes Menhera After 10 Days - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - Day 5

[MangaDex]

 

[winterume]

 

[TheBlackGamer]

Idk this one ain't doing it for me. The dialouge is kinda stilted and awkward. I guess that's how she is given she doesn't understand love but still.

 

[Pokebat]

The dialouge is kinda stilted and awkward. I guess that's how she is given she doesn't understand love but still.

I didn't spend much time proofreading this chapter so that may be it.

 

[Pouco-chan]

I would have chosen something perverted. That must be why i'm single. lol~

 

[BakedBanana]

Nice.

 

[orangerain7734]

You gotta give the guy props trying to be serious in the long-term relationship he wants, not taking the shortcut for a short-term pleasure.

 

[havelmom]

suspension of disbelief shattered

 

[CulR]

I didn't spend much time proofreading this chapter so that may be it.

It kinda fits with Menhera-ness. But I haven't seen anything that's Menhera yet. More like peer pressure.

Update:

Apparently this is a prequel and the other one is the main work? At the end of the main story, it says she become obsessive after this part, so we'll get to see her Menhera side soon.

 

[cheekibreeki]

So, what flavor of menhera are we looking at here?

 

[InsaneAwesomeTony]

Thanks for the chapter 🙏🏼

 

[hellknightofdeath]

Blank pages between panels would be fine as long as they're not full-length. Sorta like those mini-title-cards you see in long strip manga sometimes? Not sure if that makes sense.

 

[GambierBay]

She really is too pure for this genre

 

[Pokebat]

It kinda fits with Menhera-ness. But I haven't seen anything that's Menhera yet. More like peer pressure.

It's more like I made her sound too proper the like "you can stay at my house" could be changed to "you stay over" which fit her character better and conveys the same information. The lines "It was easy to understand what your explanations." and "You're really good at teaching." were swapped, and the section where she talks about their relationship needs to be edited to flow better.

 

[PoDH]

Gsi I don't know why but Zurikishi is the only one you can't find a free raw in  certain site. I found raw for Giba-chan and Contllenge, but notn Zurikishi.

 

[Pokebat]

Gsi I don't know why but Zurikishi is the only one you can't find a free raw in  certain site. I found raw for Giba-chan and Contllenge, but notn Zurikishi.

you might need to mispell zurikishi as zurikisi

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[PoDH]

you might need to mispell zurikishi as zurikisi

I tried, tried with zurik to see the autofill, it's not in Hitomi.

 

[Pokebat]

I tried, tried with zurik to see the autofill, it's not in Hitomi.

Ah. I got the raws off of kemono.party where it is spelled zurikisi

 

[HoangDinh]

kissing is already lewd tho