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This archery scene is less impactful here compared to the webnovel. Chapter 56 Bet (2).

Annoying little brat indeed.

Complete fucking garbage. Not for me, I guess.

This dragon arc sure was a step down.

Cute and funny.

Feels like editor-san is doing his best to salvage the story by really making it lean into comedy.

Editor-san must've had enough of this fucking arc.

Starting to see that this manga isn't going to do anything clever.

Shit chapter.

Black haired girl is truly a shit. Everyone acts like a talk show host instead of a human being with all of these quick quips.

Based smug kid just can't stop being right.

A shame the rating got upgraded. At times the narration was less introspective and more horny, which clashed with the atmosphere. Most of the time the censorship was a lazy whited-out square, when it could have done a lot more with intentionally obfuscating things; to try and play around with...

This was uninspired shit as a WN, and much the same as a manga.

Too much attention being spent here with too little development to show for it. Could also be seen in the Yumeoka and Liu fight. It will probably get better when there are less of these chapter-consuming flashbacks. Probably.

Pacing is ridiculously bad, even for shounenshit.

I agree with the message of this.

Could be worse.

We could have had a Shi Fei manga.

Seriously impressed by this and the artist. His H-works are rather shitty but this manga is perfection.

That fuck mothering tsuchinoko.