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Wait, so her trauma is getting stuck in an oppressive party, getting worked to exhaustion, and then left behind? I mean, that's bad but... Is that it? This is more or less the tale of anyone stuck in a black workplace that many isekai tales start with (before the isekai starts). It also doesn't...

@Uthred Your right, I tried to read this as though it had logically consistent magic system. It clearly doesn't and it's contradictory mess. Thanks for making me realize the story is even worse than I thought it was originally.

Chapter 1, she calls war a "sin" uses some form of guilt/penitence of taking part as reason for turning down all rewards... What the actual F#$@? First, she sought out a part in the war herself, and second, war is a sin? What's next, is she going to say that self defense is treason against your...

@eminyan Temper tantrum? Treason? What are you talking about? The country already tried to kill her and she's running to another country in an attempt to stay alive. Not to mention she was never a citizen in the first place. This is WAY beyond simple temper tantrums and treason doesn't even...

There's no actual story here, the MC has no goals, his head in the clouds and the only personality he's shown so far is "I'm awesome, therefore worship me!". As others have said, this is a mishmash of elements from other stories just thrown together in a pot with no rhyme or reason, with...

I'm getting confused, chapter 1 clearly shows that guns have no effect on even the weakest creatures, and clearly the people in chapter 2 are not using any sort of powers/skills/enhancements with their guns, and clearly the guns are not doing any observable damage... Why the #$%@# are guns even...

So she can imbue holy (purification) power into swords and foods... So why can't she just use it directly on people? Or even better, why can't the knight with the imbued sword just slash/smack the people themselves? Clearly the sword doesn't harm the spirits after being blessed by her. The...

Wait wait wait.... WTF? In chapter 6 she clearly tells them that the magic stone is in a freaking mountain! Now it's suddenly in a city slum? She sold the information on the stone, and they clearly stated that they would retrieve it, so what is she doing here? Is she suddenly aware of...

This chapter made no sense. She says "The magic stone is created by thousands of magicians pouring their magic into it", which clearly marks it as artificial/man-made as well as a singular object (e.g. There's only one). However they then immediately say it's rare, implying that there is more...

Short! Oi~ Glad to have more, but, gimme content!

@Solipsist Apologies in advance for the text wall. Sure I'm making some assumptions, but they're all based on statements in the story and/or established structures of how royalty/authority/combat works. Personally, I think it's a sign of a good story when there's enough details in there that...

@Solipsist Like I said before, the prince doesn't really matter here. Yes, he essentially told the guildmaster that if given the opportunity he was going to kill the prince, and she mentions his guards are strong, but there is no mention of killing outside of that. The prince is likely not...

@Solipsist That's the thing though, the royal authority of the king/prince doesn't actually matter at all here, the only consideration he has to be mindful of is the guild, and not because their are powerful, but for the one simple reason that is the fact that they have strict control over all...

@Nk9bjP4A No, the MC doesn't say anything about the guildmaster, he only says that he came via an emergency portal and any records of his presence on the floor have been erased. This only strengthens his position as the prince has no one at the guild to lean on, and makes the prince himself...

@Nk9bjP4A You're assuming that the MC is some super human who can one man army any and all adventurers on the floor without issue. He is clearly approaching this as an infiltration grab and go, this isn't the time for a power fantasy murder fest, he likely doesn't even have the power for that...

I mean, what young women looking for a relationship wouldn't jump at those perfect conditions? A young (good looking?) person in need of guidance that has massive potential of wealth and fame? I mean, if we want to flip that around, that's like a perfect 10 superwoman walks in and the readers...

So many mindlessly bloodthirsty people in here. 1. He is being possessed by the ghost of an elven hero, the rescue of the elf is the only actual goal here from the very beginning. Not vengeance. 2. Others are closing in, if he gets seen by anyone then killing them would only make things worse...

This story is super hard to follow, it feels like it makes huge assumptions on the readers detailed familiarity with royal family structures and inter-relations, except how they work in this story is all messed up, which just leaves the reader going... uh... What? Also, in what world are the...

So let's see... 1. Fantasy medieval setting where people are commonly attacked by monsters... Check 2. Human female in poor condition in a near death situation from said monsters... Check 3. A larger and more dangerous monster appears and starts killing things... Check 4. In the midst of...

This is pretty low-tier honestly. Every player he meets loves him or are comedic fall guys to make MC look better. The PK characters are worried about the PK penalty. The MC proceeds to PK them (He had his pet half kill one of them, e.g. He struck first, which should flag him as a PK'er), and...