@Ironclad It doesn't make him look less pathetic, but the story states the company is aware of the security breach, and that they can't do anything about the data lost. Which is almost nonsensical if you know anything about IT or how IT-related companies work, as that would imply a hilarious...
@Kampfarsch The 6-ball doesn't even exist until the instructions are read, so yes, "believed to be its packaging" is appropriate here. There's no mystery, it's spelled out pretty clearly.
Perhaps a little too fast, there are typos going unnoticed. Such as, "magical swordsman under" instead of what I assume should be "magical swordsman user," or "Looks like your not just a regular old man" instead of "Looks like you're..."