We appreciate the work. But may I suggest, have you considered adding a proofreader?
Even if you are using Indonesian as base, and don't have original Japanese for context...
...a proofreader with native English background can smooth out inconsistencies in grammar.
The typesetting is great. So...
Rule says don't enter the hallway. Don't touch patients "while in training".
Elderly person is choking on mochi and dying in the hallway.
Saintess goes out into the hallway to do the heimlich maneuver to save the dying person.
Elderly person survives.
Saintess is punished.
How much sense does...
...the corruption is spreading. :meguusmug:
Pretty soon Hirune will turn the church into a debauched festival of corrupted former-saintesses girls, sleeping with other former-saintess girls.
"Those who nap with the goddess's saintess will be brought by degrees to wield her body pillow."
TL;DR: Self-identified slave with strangely misplaced "pride".
Take it as a premise/setup for a "manzai" routine.
And not commentary on the social (bad) practice.
In other words, a 1-page "two people walk into a bar" skit.
Since he's a scout, he should use DemoPan sound non-stop on friendlies to summon citizens from the capital.
Bonus points: would expose the enemy spy slime.
"NEED A CITY HERE! NEED A CITY HERE!"
See the splash page from the previous chapter intro.
This is a 1:1 artistic throwback to that panel. Showing her "transformation", magical-girl style.
https://mangadex.org/chapter/c6dd9296-55df-4a0a-8db0-d18d47ae568f/2
I take no offense to it. And I doubt very many others do either.
It's their...
"That One Time I Got Isekaied and Accidentally Seduced the Demon Lord (♀)"
Although I'm a bit apprehensive of this turning into a "collect the plot tokens" manga.
I kinda liked the plot a bit more when the other two heroes went rogue running from assassins.
Very few JP WN/LN/Manga approached...
Wait... did all chapters just vanish?
(Momentary server glitch.)
Also, are we on Planet Namek or something?
Villains following the same universe rules as the Protagonists would be nice.
In any fiction.
Chapter 20 (Shu searches for Isis) -> 21 (Iris POV).
Be warned the events are slightly different in WN than Manga.
The manga artist did a great job with art to make the story more a visual delight.
But also meant had to take liberties to make it more dramatic to convey Shu's "emotions".
Don't...