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  1. AirenxVia

    The world of Ardevias

    So, this is not a story, but more a dump of idea about the world where my story take place Genre: Isekai, Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Ecchi, Genderswap, seinen Main Settings A somewhat generic isekai fantasy world with rpg elements in it(A placeholder for now) Back Story and Plot Hundreds of...
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    Neta Chara Kari Play no Tsumori ga Isekai Shoukan ~Mayoibito wa Josei no Teki ni Ninteisaremashita~

    @TheDollCollector Then, don't read if you're disgusted with it. There are a lot of those which are anatomically correct and the same also goes on with the one didn't. How they depicted and how they were drawn it's up to the agreement of the artist, author, and the publisher. Sure, they lack of...
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    e.langCode undefined

    So, i got an e.langCode undefined problem when loading a recent chapter and nothing came out except for the numbers of page. the chapter works fine after i click it, but there's still no information given about it
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    Neta Chara Kari Play no Tsumori ga Isekai Shoukan ~Mayoibito wa Josei no Teki ni Ninteisaremashita~

    @TheDollCollector I'm sorry, but i need to disagree with yours. The cover isn't that ridiculous, as it actually spot on on what the expected content are and for who the manga is actually aimed for. as for the outfit it's reasonable that it will show off as much as much skin as permitted, because...
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    NEET dakedo Hello Work ni Ittara Isekai ni Tsuretekareta - Ch. 26

    i see Sati had grown nicely well
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    writer tips

    Just came here because was interested on where the OP went, as there's no traces of him/her anywhere in the thread except the mentions 🤔🤔🤔🤔
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    Teach me Dialogues please

    @Richman Didn't know that there's such a problem of language in some countries. In my country, Indonesia, we have a lot of local language that literally can be considered foreign language with each other. Even the close one can have vastly different meaning, even though they are actually only a...
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    Teach me Dialogues please

    @Richman Umu, No prob. Actually you're giving a very good point there. Though, i never learn english aside from self studying trough games, movies, and novels, and from school. i can relate the feeling of burnout of learning the same things over and over again. In fact both of us has a lot of...
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    Teach me Dialogues please

    @pockettrash @Tamerlane Welp, time for the trusted Google Translate take care here. I think i'll post another thread about the story later, once i can form the words for the ideas of the world i want to write. Please slap me with the critics and opinions when the times come.
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    Teach me Dialogues please

    @justforthelulz i see, that's the same reason i dropped off my japanese class. 😅 @Tamerlane damn, that's real complicated for me. although, the grammar constructions and the words form looks similiar to english. it's in another whole level for me, lol. damn, my trained sleeping habit. Can't...
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    Teach me Dialogues please

    @justforthelulz Yep, never think about the tenses, just use them. Only try to find them if you felt something is wrong with your sentence.
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    Teach me Dialogues please

    @DANDAN_THE_DANDAN @Tamerlane I know it's a bit awkward and uncomfortable to read. But for some reason i see japanese way of separating conversation and narration looks neat and cleaner and I'm more comfortable to write it like that well, for now I'm still trying to find my own ways to...
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    Karada no Ichibu Igai Nyotaika Shita Hanashi

    i remember seeing this in E-hentai, but it's chinese translated. the artist is musekinin btw
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    Teach me Dialogues please

    @Tamerlane Thanks i'll check it out later and research. Also, do you mind if i use your edited paragraph in my story? @DANDAN_THE_DANDAN Can't say that i had begun my writing journey. but, i won't say that wrong too. as it's actually been 2 years since i started writing, but i just started this...
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    Any books change your life? Literally?

    the manga of Boku Girl and Oto X Mahou, opened the path of Traps for me
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    Teach me Dialogues please

    @Tamerlane Thanks for the advice, that really helped me not only with the dialogue problem, but also the way i write my narration. Man, there's a lot of dictions that i need to learn and get used to. as for the way the narration was written, it is indeed a part of my amateurly writing and my...
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    Teach me Dialogues please

    i've been learning how to write my own story for a while and shared it with my close reading friends. I haven't shared any here thoughts. but lately i've been stucks in making dialogues for my story. Especially when the mc is just a bystander and/or neither the character that talks play major...
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    Data Saver and MD@Home

    I'm not sure if this related to Data saver and MD@home being turned on together or not, but sometimes in a rare chance, i got a broken image that persist even after i reload the page. The broken image also comes with several version, one time i got a badly pixelated image where the pixel got...
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    Mone-san no Majime Sugiru Tsukiaikata - Vol. 2 Ch. 11 - Break Up...? Part 2

    i just realized that Kagerou head accessories looks like a bra
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    Kyoukai Meikyuu to Ikai no Majutsushi

    @Ddraigg you too? I thought it just me who got glitched out page
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