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A Tale of the Secret Saint is like this to where all saints are selfish. It's the same setup too, where a saint is more powerful the more selfless they are. Seems to be, anyway. Loved the chapter, there's basically at least one joke on every page while still advancing the plot, that's insane...

That won't do any good. The only choice is for the son to prostrate, because he's near Gard and in a position to learn from him, unlike dad, with the idea being Lot could fill the shoes to some degree after that. That could work, but I don't think it will happen. I'm not sure if Gard is...

In dystopian fantasy worlds, which this seems to be: If you're camping, you're camping. Better post a lookout. Vigilance is a good defense. If you're going someplace to settle, put a palisade first. That way you only lose when something stronger shows up, rather than the first thing that...

This other work, "Disciple of the Lich," takes place in an artificial world, created by gods or their servants (it's not exactly clear) for their own entertainment. The main character comments that towns/villages/cities get attacked far more often than could be the case in a real world and the...

I thought big creatures would need to breathe more often but it turns out that's not right. You: 12-20 breaths per minute Dolphin (bigger than you): 5 breaths per minute (more when active) Orca (much bigger than you): 1.2 to 1.8 breaths per minute (more when active) Elephant: 5 to 6 breaths per...

I feel the scene with Lot at the end of this part wastes too much time or it's too boring. The fight could've been over already.

I didn't know Kalin beat one of the big four eight. I suppose there's another nearby in need of a beating.

Words and evidence wouldn't work. He has other options to try to convince them. Fireball to the face wouldn't work because Lot can do that and he hasn't been to the magic academy yet. I was thinking teleport them to a monster corpse because it's more unbelievable that could be fake (whereas a...

You should have a bad bruise after this similar to when someone shoots you while wearing a bulletproof vest. The bullet does not go through a bulletproof vest but it's like getting hit with a hammer, not fun.

She's part monster tamer and part wizard. She looks like she couldn't hurt a fly but is more dangerous than that. The problem with that theory is motive - she has no plausible reason to kidnap him.

I feel like they could be stronger than him eventually if the author will let it happen because they have unique powers (that can't be learned) and he doesn't. Also there are two of them, so if each is half as strong as him, they're already stronger, because coordination is worth something...

The sundial-type clock is easy to make with just sticks (easy enough to do yourself - sometimes done as an elementary school class project) but anything better than that is hard to make.

It makes sense with how well they can do their twin routine - where they both say the wham line together and no man can resist with how cute it is.

p30 (last panel) is basically "fate worse than death." It prolongs the story because killing Pina and even getting away with it would be easy, but handing out the fate worse than death can be quite difficult. It's also used to show how evil the character is.

I think it's leading to a generic I Choose to Stay. Because the goddess specifically mentions that choosing to stay is an option. A lot of isekaiees have no choice but to stay - as there's no way back. Some of them ask foreigners: "If you could go back, would you?" It's often just a thought...

Specific examples help. I feel like it could use more editing sometimes (no Japanese knowledge required), like: Baddies' TL: Look into the movement of the Star Maiden's cash flow. Better: Look into the Star Maiden's cash flow.

I thought the opposite where soldiers don't even wear them when not expecting combat because it's heavy. You would only ever see on-duty or training soldiers wearing it.

I think Celestria also said her healing powers weren't great before back in Ch. 9. Normally Goddesses hate monsters and sometimes give humans powers to help them deal with them. It's unusual for a Goddess to give a monster powers. I can only think that the slimes in this world are weak and...

Ch 0 summary: (I MTL'd)

Falling from height using falling technique is real, I think I saw it on Discovery a really long time ago. You can't really survive a fall but you can survive jumping down 30 ft onto hard ground without major injury. And then you can get lucky, remember those stories of people who survived...