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This should be studied in writing schools as "what NOT to do". The MC is an unknow quantity, an anonymous anomaly, but the world still behave in a way that wouldn't make sense if they weren't here. E.G.:

This is even worse than I expected. Why, all of a sudden, did the exam change from 1-on-1 to "everyone fight a dragon"? Coincidence, just when the MC is passing the exam? In a normal story, I'd think there's some meaning behind it, but here, it's probably just bad writing. What's the point of...

That's the stupidest way possible to conduct a selection exam. Either no-one can beat the dragon, and everyone fails; or there's at least one, or a small group, that can, and then what? Everyone pass? Or only those who kill the dragon? If the overpowered MC does it alone in 10 sec, everyone else...

"Dragon! Knight! Girl!" It's like a parody of an 70's show, except it's played straight...

That's disappointing. After the last chapter, I was eagerly waiting for the FL to humiliate those knights by dominating them at what they're most proud of, swordfighting. Crushing them like they're housecats facing a tiger. Not "poof, magic butterflies make everybody faint!" Sure, it's an...

What'd you expect from translators that makes the FL, a former noble tutoring noble children on everything including etiquette, say "I apologize for making you come to this shithole" to the Emperor? That write "I'm going to study your highness" which is nonsense, when it's blatant it should be...

That's some useless guard on that sword

"I'm so hot all the time" Yes you are :meguusmug:

"He killed the shadow brothers and probably Bones, and he knows your face, so go kill him alone" What a great strategist /s

You know it's gonna be a bad translation when the MC says "I was possessed by the villainess", when she's the one doing the "possessing".

According to the credits, the translator changed since theses characters' last appearance, so the new guy mustn't have read the earlier chapters carefully. Or they don't know "matriarch" is for women, "patriarch" for men.

Jin's better not anger mother-in-law

"Lanier Chambre" so... Strap Bedroom? kinky :smug:

The MC's father is even as dense and tactless as Kogoro Mouri

If the old man with a japanese name pulls out a katana in the next chapter, I'm flipping tables.

vulgar adjective (RUDE). rude and likely to upset or anger people, especially by referring to sex and the body in an unpleasant way I didn't see her doing anything vulgar. On the contrary, all her attempts at sexyness are clumsy and naive.

4, 7, 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, 1, based on their tastes and expectations.

Did anyone else spend two minutes deciphering "alpha" in that doctor-writing like font? I hope it's not used anymore...

Where have I seen a "ML dreams of another misterious girl from childhood, but it's not the FL" scene for the first time? I''s, maybe?

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