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Seriously, a tl note to explain what "stab wound" means?

"Robots is one of men's dream" Yeah, If that robot is 2B. You can keep you klunky toy stuck on a boat.

Oh no, you don't get the right to act all sympathetic to the original Fiona. You gave her this difficult life, more even worse to come. You shouldn't have used the her as a mere plot device in you novel then. Could have used the first prince, who's evil despite having everything, by his own...

"How can you prove you're not a spy?" Dude, maybe a spy would know about the ambushes, but how would they know about the blizzard suddenly stopping?

This is lowering my opinion of the MC even more. Not only, as the novel's author, did she give the original Fiona a miserable life and a disproportionate punishment, she made the one person that caused her to become the villainess the second male lead? WTF?

I'd say the MC's behaviour is consistent for someone who's writen a novel where the main characters have to endure abuse as children, not only the ML for whom she wrote a bright future, but also the villainess that, not content with killing her, she also send to suffer eternally in hell. You...

I'm ready this from the start again after a long time, and I've got little sympathy for the MC's ordeal from the setup explained in the 1st chapter. She wrote the novel, so she's responsible for the backstory of her villainess. She's the one who was perfectly fine with writing a character that...

The TL starts OK, but it soon devolves in the unreadable mess typical of those low-effort groups, complete with wrong genders, pronouns, names changing randomly, etc...

What a garbage fire of a translation. We've reached the point where they don't even care who talks and to whom, they just put random pronouns. "It's the empress, he (she) is so small and cute", "This is the emperor (empress), so I (you) should show some manners", "The emperor (we) have arrived"...

Until now, the tl used "Oshcar" for Mabelle's baby-talk misprununciation of Oscar. In this chapter, "Oshcar" becomes Otsucr, Otsur, Otsuc, or just Oscar. So, according to the credits, the guy that used "Oshcar" when he was on TL, has no issue with this clusterf*ck of a chapter where he's on QC?

Ah yes, madeleines, those famous "candies" /s

"If you are intrested" They can't even spellcheck their recruiting banner but put their logos/links wherever there's some space... It's like a building company with the storefront falling apart, but the employees are busy putting leaflets on every car's windshield in town instead of doing...

"Captured", not "captivated"

What happens in the story after you made your initial comment is irrelevant. It doesn't matter if she turns out to be the demon lord or a saintess, you made that comment from what you knew at ch. 13. You didn't say "I don't want to keep seeing this character", but "I would hope she dies". Not...

Great, two recipes for food only known in Japan, one of which sounds disgusting. Squids fermented in their own viscera, that sure sounds like it would be a popular dish in a medieval city, not to mention quick and easy to make! /s

Well, I didn't forget. In fact, I was especially waiting for her reappearance to see how the author would handle it. Turns out it's just as generic as expected, which makes her first introduction even worse. She wasn't meant to be an arrogant bitch, just competitive and probably tsundere, it's...

If the jelly has the same effect as the chips, but is easier to get, what's the point of the chips?

From the mouth of the MC: "Beast chips is something so delicious they push aside their base instinct" So, it brainwashes them into accepting the contract. If the MC cared about the monster's will, he wouldn't use a substance that alter it. He's like some creep spiking the drink of a girl that...

"I don't need to explain that right now" Why? "Draining the blood makes the meat taste better." There, explained, and now you don't look like a weirdo that like to spill blood on the floor.

The MC's plan is stupid. He just got into this world, and has only seen a bit of a forest and a bit of a sea, and he wants to go to the worst place immediatly? Why? Isn't there enough things to discover in this world before jumping straight to the badlands? It's like an american going to Tokyo...