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"It's even better than sex, don't you know?!" Sir I'm like 12 please stop that.

When I saw the sudden genderbend, I scrolled up to see if this is 21.5 omake or something. Nope. Actual canon chapter. Man, this story really is running on fumes. The author even felt it necessary to have yet another antagonistic knight thrown in.

The "problem" being is that this plot point is literally copy pasted across 80% of "Got kicked out of my party" kind of stories. It's actually quite remarkable. You can literay make a bingo out of this shit. Because of course the arsehat that kicked the MC, fails, and turns into a demon.

And dedicating 1-2 pages just to illustrate that point, on how plausible it is that "god made it better, because god's imagination is so much more vivid than our own", is why it's bad writing. If all the author wanted to do was to pull a: "actually I dunno", could've just said that and...

I don't think it has anything to do with self-insertion, but more to do with: "If the MC is as neutral as possible, then it's incredibly easy to write him into literally any situation ever, and he'd just get dragged along with it. An MC with a personality is more difficult to write." Anyway, I...

"how come our phones still work" "because god made it better" That's a question and an answer.

That's literally why it's a shitty explanation, and a cop out... It's not interesting, and comes across as trying to solve a problem that didn't need solving.

This is probably the most straightforward "Eh, it's alright.." read I've seen in a while.

It's always a blast to read a story that basically goes: "Hitler did nothing wrong", and you have to remind yourself: "No, wait, hold on, that's still Hitler". :v (Of course the analogy doesn't really quite work here) Solid villain backstory though. That being said, the explanation about "why...

Will this story have an arc that's longer than 2 chapters? Place your bets!

I agree the last fight was anything but grounded, yes. And I am clearly not too invested in the story, overall I agree with what you wrote there.

Well, to be fair, I was reading this on-and-off, so I don't have 20/20 vision on this one -- but it sure didn't felt like the author had any more punches to pull with the power levels. "Wyze", as a tool, stopped being worked on in the last arc. The MC even fused 2 wyze-methods together, and then...

That villain's speech was so dumb I was actually left speechless. "Well, uh, because you're so radiant, it made me want to capitalize you, so, uh, you're the bad guy here! Become my property so I can do cool stuff, or else you're like, totes evil!" That's so childish and idiotic, the writer...

I too am shocked this actually ended. When I saw "141 end", I went: "wtf do you mean 'end'??" The ending feels kinda rushed, but, eh, yeah. Kinda feels like it had no more proper room to power up the MC without power-creeping. So it's better to just end it, than to have the MC gain dragonborn...

I kept expecting someone to rescue the disciple, because that's the moat generic thing one can write. It's an expected cliche. But, no, she carried on by herself. Nice.

I'll drop it here. I get not wanting to flaunt your strengths, but constantly taking losses is pathetic when you're practically a demigod. You want to tell me the MC cannot conceive any countermeasures that would also not show off his strengths? His mastery of magic means nothing...

It's fine to have sex before marriage, because this ain't the 18th century.

You should get a proof reader.

Having to "keep someone alive", while also crippling them, isn't any better, really. We also don't really know just how bad it is to "eat someone's roots", but at this point it's not worth digging any deeper. I still think he's a character that can't be morally salvaged, but indeed it's not of a...

EDIT: going by the next chapter, that eater's ability is not as sinister and murderous as it seemed it was. That somehow makes this situation even worse for me, as if someone was propped up as a devil, but was only a nuisance at the end. A very tame and lame ending, fitting. The fact that so...