It's like I'm reading two stories that aren't interacting with each other. MC can't understand what is going on and follows the flow by playing his shadow game. His part of the story is like reading about man soloplaying among decorations.
The second story, on the other hand, is about people...
The artist is doing a very poor job in the most crucial part. Drawing breasts.
I'm not joking, there is nothing to keep my attention except big tits in this manga. However, the novel's artist is pretty good at catching the main feature. Just compare manga to novel's illustrations.
It's better...
So much 1-star ratings just because of people who saw for the first time in their life a fantasy story, that tries to break a cliche. Or maybe the real reason is because of denial. Many of them saw themselves in Chiba. Yeah, that's your typical otaku or neet MC.
This is the first time I've failed to even finish the first chapter.
Neet, cheats, Goddess, betrayal, "useless" skills, 2-pages reincarnation... it's like an example of how not to write a fantasy.
This story is absolutely illogical.
Mapping is very useful for exploration. You don't need to be the best team in the world to understand it.
He was blamed just to give us some cheap betrayal. No one can blame the MC after him clearly stating his skill. He can only be blamed for using it poorly...
This is retarded. I wonder if Japs have some manga writing classes. I bet one of the lessons is to cockblock your reader just because it's hard to write a proper harem romance.
Now she should betray him to make things better. This will help MC to grow and also will make the world more dangerous. But this is a wish-fulfillment story so nothing will happen.
Sadly, revenge stories often have a flaw of introducing the revenge subject in a few pages or even panels. It's so...