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FYI @Rei_Eikou, in case you haven't seen it, I made some edit suggestions in this comment.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @The_Lamb p11 extreems -> extremes p13 No I've never -> No, I've never // No. I've never p19 geniune -> genuine p20 pidgeon holed -> pidgeonholed // pidgeon-holed (Finally, most speech bubbles have no punctuation at the end, and would benefit...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Xunder @AlphaTM p4 Please excuse me a moment! -> Please excuse me for a moment! p9 You have need of my power, do you? -> You have need of my power, don't you? p10 brand new dojo -> brand-new dojo p12 though military force alone -> through...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Xunder @AlphaTM p2 brand new city -> brand-new city p3 known as the "the three disciplines." -> known as the "three disciplines". p3 two handed -> two-handed p22 real world, practical experience -> real-world p30 What's happening now is her...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Xunder @AlphaTM p8 indigineous -> indigenous p24 there's countless things you need to remember -> there are countless things p27 You can do whatever ya like -> Ya x2 // You x2 p32 literally pry it -> literally pry the license

Thanks for the chapter! Edit suggestion: @LazyDust Still not notice me.. -> She still hasn't noticed me... // Still unnoticed...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Diyuuuuuu p11 let him wander off!? It's a dragon! -> He's a dragon! p12 It'll be bad if anything happens to him -> It'd be bad if anything happened to him p12 Because Ryuu's a smart kid. He'll be fine, right? -> Ryuu's a smart kid, so he'll be...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @maibi p16 Here's your wages -> Here are your wages p18 Next time, The Ogami's second daughter -> Next time, the p18 Itsuki, on an errand. -> Itsuki, is on an errand.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Nosebleed p9 to you run on -> do you run on p27 Did finish inking yet? -> Did you finish inking yet? // Finished inking yet?

No, no, we just happen to be called "Crystal Bakery", there's no deeper meaning whatsoever!

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @20thCenturyBoy p18 whateves -> whatevs // whatever p29 Absolutey!! -> Absolutely!! p34 I was thinking when I... -> I was thinking about when I... p34 (In the list of reasons, the four paragraphs have no periods at their ends.) p34 Not to...

What did p41 mean? "You say that I helped you, but... it's because of you that I left that space. I should be the one thanking you."

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @NamekazeMinato p2 if Kuriko write something -> if Kuriko writes something p13 most the sugar in the syrup -> most of the sugar people in the syrup p20 to snacks aisle -> to the snacks aisle p32 find her quick! -> find her quickly!

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Hamaguy p17 That arrow of light, I should be able to dodge them -> Those arrows of light, I should be able to dodge them p19 you'll have to be a human -> you'd have to be a human p25 extent of my resolve, -> extent of my resolve. p25 oblige-...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Electromaster (Mostly, a few speech bubbles lack punctuation at the end.) p6 Night Mist Hawks -> Night Mist Hawks. p6 bound by the law -> bound by the law. p7 hard to swallow -> hard to swallow. p11 waiting to be attacked anyway. -> waiting to...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @dexec p4 I'm hoping I could lend a hand is possible -> if possible p5 Diabolos' Tear -> Diabolos' Tears p8 I don't have obligation to -> I don't have an/any obligation to p8 but please do tell me if one does. -> Nevertheless, please do tell...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @ma_ko p11 Sorry for making you wait Elria-sama -> Sorry for making you wait, Elria-sama p13 After Elria-sama's death, I desperately search for you again. -> searched (though actually, without seeing the raws, maybe the meaning was more like...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @Teasday p2 (the quotation marks for the combos in each case begin with the combo and end before "combo is the best!", but in later pages the quotation mark always begins with "the" and ends after "best!") p4 should be good to with him ->...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: @TGS p7 his exceptional accomplishments as a mercenary still doesn't do justice -> don't do justice p7 demons he defeated -> demons he has defeated p11 something about you remind me -> reminds me p25 it was some kind of crazy sharp spider webs...

Sure.