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Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: p1 & p4 title: "The princess challenges The Hero waging The Sage" -> ?? (I didn't understand this title.) p5 "since little" -> "since they were little" / "since childhood" p7 "to rival some like Elria" -> "to rival someone like Elria" p8 "You...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: p7 "don't start throwing tantrum in a public like this" -> "don't start throwing a tantrum in public like this" p10 "I didn't mean badly by that." -> "I didn't mean anything bad by that."

I'm not familiar with the tactical details of WW II history, but the scenario in Youjo Senki is this: Officially, the Empire is currently only at war with the Free Francois Republic (which is situated in Africa, where its colonies are), whereas all the other major powers like Albion and the...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos and edit suggestions: p2 Today, all I need to do is one -> Today, all I need to do is one thing. p4 (In the first speech bubble, the semicolon is on a new line, rather than at the end of the old one)

Elria: "I see, sounds like I'll have to learn time magic."

This was a fun arc. It's worth mentioning though that Mirror Lady could've already beaten Lucas if, in their previous battle (i.e. before they reached the capital), she either hadn't cared about her revived daughter, or if she'd fought Lucas & co despite her daughter's presence.

As in, "Your job is to succeed me as the Pope of this nation"? Seems related to the mercenary captain possibly being related to the Pope's or the tower's powers (e.g. via artificial clones or a shadow clone technique), and to him teaching Ryuka about military strategy.

Thanks for the chapter! Typos and edit suggestions: and all those meet Palome's eyes -> and all those who meet Palome's eyes And I wonder if we'd be even any help in the first place... -> And I wonder if we'd even be any help in the first place...

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: p7 Dialolos's cult -> Diabolos cult p8 FX: spark x2 -> sparkle x2 p11 FX: krack -> crack

Thanks for the chapter! Typos & edit suggestions: p7 Many came to the estate to study then return with their newly cultivated skills to their homeland -> to study and then return / to study before returning p8 As for me, I am now able to count money I can help out! -> money, I can p12 [the...

The art styles of these two mangas are extremely different. I'm really surprised they're drawn by the same mangaka. Talk about multi-talented.

In her previous life, Ginko was called the "demon swordsman" ("They say she's a real demon!"), and her prayer to the buddha was as follows: "I want to die fighting intensely to the end. I don't need salvation. I want an enemy. If I'm a demon, then send me to a hell overrun with rakshasa [=...

Edit suggestion: p22 "I'll kill all who rebels!!" -> "I'll kill all who rebel!!"

Thoughts: I wonder if the Gate of Purgatory will become relevant for the speedrun? The Elite Four bases are connected to the round table via teleportation magic. Presumably our resident speedrunner would love to speed up the 100% run by using that. Arachne's current puppet is certainly Noran...

Some trash-talk bangers in this chapter: Insulting the spider as an "insect"; and calling the ooze boss monster a "low class demon" (because oozes are often the starting-level monsters in games).

Thanks for the chapter! Edit suggestions: p3 that has monsters. -> that contains monsters. // that's full of monsters. p4 There's a lot of small -> There are a lot of small p6 you can discuss it amongst yourselves -> you can discuss amongst yourselves p8 those dummies are also a magic tool ->...

That's a rather disappointing setup for the antagonists. Not only are narcissism and a sense of personal superiority not enough to explain why someone would try to randomly get people killed (e.g. other narcisstic characters might instead thrive on adulation by the "unwashed masses"). But also...

The phrasing and outcome of the trade discussion (p14~16) are weird. Maybe it's a translation issue, and the idea is supposed to be that a crafted staff is sold for 1000-10000g (what a price range), but that that involves tons of steps incl. the cost for the raw gem, other materials, and various...

Based on later chapters, it seems like c5p5 should read "Auto Battle allows automatically fighting any enemy who(se type) you've already fought before", to parallel the restriction on the Auto Travel skill.

Thanks for the chapter! Edit suggestions: p24 in the meanteam -> in the meantime p28 so I can't do anything like purification or anything like that -> so I can't do purification or anything like that p31 so if anything happens come on by! -> so if anything happens, come on by!