You really nee-
d to stop brea-
king your sen-
ences so unn-
aturally, it's h-
ard to read it
like that.
Maybe use a smaller
font so that it fits
better in the text
boxes?
"Oh em gee, they're such a pansy"
"Jeezus Christ, are they a sociopath?"
Y'all are never happy with how any character acts in any situation. If you're so smart about how characters should act, write your own goddamn stories.