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This series feels like it's not sure what it wants to be about

Did you accidentally swap some of the speech bubbles? You've got dialogue in the thought bubbles, and inner thoughts in the dialogue bubbles

Y'all are overthinking it. It's Yokai, yokai-magic says it'll work because shut up

Glad to see I'm not the only one suspicious about his death. I mean, between that garbage-sounding battle tactic and the fact that there's no corpse, i wouldn't be surprised if "King's Eagle Attack" was actually a fictitious strategy used to hide that they stabbed him in the back and dumped him...

I gotta admit, besides being excessively horny, his claim was rather effective at dissipating the unrest and suspicion that the adventurers were having

Bummer, i was looking forward to this one

Just a note, on page 2 you swapped Feris' and Gracie's descriptions, and you translated Veggie's name as "Hane"

Oh yeah, i forgot that the deaf community is host to a rather sizable cult of "fuck everybody who can hear" Pretty sure they're more of an exception rather than the usual response

Ah, so i was right in assuming that they were projecting neurodivergent labels onto a character that doesn't explicitly (or even implicitly) have those labels

Just gonna play devil's advocate, but there's really only so much you can do with a protagonist that can't always see, it limits their autonomy, and I'm pretty sure that being blind doesn't have any sort of secret advantages, even if she did have the spatial awareness magic. Also, and i know...

I wasn't paying full attention, what exactly did Rolo do to make her overexert herself? What does "coded" mean in this context?

God i wish she was mine Or that i was her

What a selfish bastard, hope he dies after learning that he's a piece of shit and that the son he threw out was truly great

While i understand that you guys wanna translate this, can you possibly do a bit less "burindu idiotto turansuration"? I mean, for fucks sake on page three you translated the same attack name as Celestial Cut and Celestial fucking COURT. Please, have someone who can actually comprehend the...

Man boobs are still acceptable boobs if the belly is not fat

Is it just me, or was the image quality a bit...fuzzy i think is the word I'm looking for?

Oh i forgot about this

Aww man, it's almost over?

Did i miss something, or did she bring up marriage completely unprompted?

Why did this need to be split into 2 chapters? Just merge them together and bam, it's a oneshot