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So why has the gods put him where he is? To kill or subjugate the demon king? It seems asinine to put him here with no knowledge.

MC is like "I wish they would be more modest around me" like dude youve literally been sexing multiple women everynight including tyese girls.... why would you be anti nudity with them....

Also his wish was to get more powerful and he gave up progression the literal opposite of why he was attempting the pact.

Honestly I think tye hollow lore was added to have a new drama/comedy/fluffy piece for the author.

So like I thought, 5 gold coins and he couldnt get a house? How does anyone in this town have a place if 5 gold coins doesnt net you even a derelict house.

If your gonna have tye hollow be a non issue did it need to be a world lore issue? Could be cut and itd change nothibg.

Isnt 5 gold coins like an insane amount of money? Why can it only get essentially non-homes.

That Viscount is 100% gonna attempt or will kidnap/force Aix to make tye items. The setup is too obvious.

This really is peak poor writing, I knew as soon as she was confessing he'd be gone cause nobe of tye writing has been good.... that noble also infront of a queen threatening her friend just geh. Also watch as said noble will mess with Aix more now.

This series I put on hold for a bit and come back to this junk writing? Also as others have said this is dragging out waay too much.

Geh I hate when they make tye antagonists so stupid that theyd have died by now but its only now its an issue.

Also he can make a house but not a bed?

So real question, why did they have to de-cloth her? His medicine worked instantly and putting her next to a fire would have sufficed. Another also is why he didn't expect a female to wake up naked somewhere weird wouldn't freak out.... Oh the elf side she collapsed in the middle of the forest...

Have they already forgotten everytime he grows stuff it depletes the soil? Like if he wants the trees he has no reason to grow them fully then fix said soil cause farmed land doesn't just miraculously regain minerals and the like......

Ok a few art fails here, firstly the deer is supposed to be gutted but the chest cavity is closed? also post butchering (Which he somehow did perfectly) theres like 3 or 4 deer worth of meat. I really hate how everything is so easy yet they throw in the occasional "issue" as the literal moment...

I dont see comments but MC is retarded to be making a fire in a wooden house in the middle of a forest and he doesn't even have a way to put it out. Also while suprising he was failing at fire making it's ok sudden deus ex machina golem (Which feels really out of place since his blessing is...

ch1 and we already have some evidence of bad writing. Also that deer would be rotten it ain't fully submerged. Another also is hearing some offhand remarks and killing, gutting and all that are completely different. I hate that the house just got "made" like this makes no sense he can just now...

So once again another chapter that proves in a single night he could have solved everything easily in the background without drawing attention to himself...... This is why the author is bad at writing and why this is all very stupid so far. All he had to do was dress as the hero while he did it...

So we see the MC deals with the situation in literal minutes...... and he waited until the seige to act.

This is beyond absurd, firstly it's gotten to this point cause he REFUSES TO ACT. He has no reason to hide his power especially when it could result in so many deaths including people he knows...... Secondly he keeps hiding things from his own party that makes no sense, the slaves literally...