It really sucks seeing the quality of a translation visibly plummet when a new person or group picks something up. Damn shame, because this manga is actually pretty good and a lot of its flavor is lost on the bad editing.
I teared up not while reading, but after reflecting on what I'd read a few minutes later, and had to come back to improve my rating. A beautiful little piece.
Yeah, it's kind of annoying that these two are split up and apparently aren't just re-treading similar ground. I read the entire other version and found its ending really lacking only to find that this was just as important to read as the other one. What a pain...