Oof, the proofreading in the latest chapter could use some work... @bedis, do you need help proofreading the English? I'd be happy to help. I do proofreading for TOOR scans as well.
@Galaxyspark Great story so far. Minor nitpicking, I'm not a big fan of the font you're using for text bubbles. Seems like it's just Comic Sans in allcaps (even though it likely isn't).