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Yeah, this chapter is nice. I like the effort you put in your redo to add such details. A small thing I noticed was on page 4, "CLASSMATE A" <- you left the "C" in blue, looks a bit weird. And I have a question regarding page 10, did you leave Sou's text bubbles on purpose? I mean it's okay...

I can get behind that statement. Slowly but steadily without overdoing it. If it turns into a chore, that's not fun at all.

Don't let Nee-san hear you! But yeah, I can easily imagine how chapter 2 will be taxing to finish. You know, if only my fantasies could be turned into images by some magic. You bet I would have released some DJs on my own already :ROFLMAO: Hey, that's fake news! (Not just Kana, Yuri would be...

It boils down to how such a family would be organized. There's a huge difference between a situation where everyone actually lives together under the same roof and the man and his wives share pretty much everything... or a setup where the man is more like a shared asset (on a rotation schedule)...

My memory might fail me here, but this chapter should have one more page where the princess looks at her glass and thinks about the next target she want to recruit...

I hope this match doesn't span ten chapters... Akira can modify his summons on-the-fly. So maybe he can look at her creature, say "Hmm. Looks interesting, let's go with that..." and then change his golem in the very same way. He has almost infinite magic compared to others so his summons move...

I can write dialogues (you might remember a few I dropped out of boredom in 1:39 chapter comments) but sadly I have no way of helping you out with Japanese translations. Good luck, I'm looking forward to see more Sumire! ♥

Her character profile: She's probably not on a chef's level but we are talking about her hobby, so Yuri will definitely invest time and effort into it to produce something she can be proud of. We should assume she's quite good if she recreates stuff from TV. (otherwise the comment would...

She can. Though it will force her to use "Memory Deception" and "Fake Lover's Boast" right in front of Sou this time. And she has a price to pay later that requires an unavoidable restroom visit.

Don't worry... happens to everyone eventually. By the way, Sumire is not a failure. She's an excellent Onee-chan by that worlds standards. You need to keep in mind how she feels - that she still wants to grant and prioritizes Sou's wishes is a huge plus. Remember, it was Sumire who made Sou's...

So, another way to look at it: you'd have the guy right next to you and your two friends enemies under close observation. Could be... let's just wait until Sumire and Sakura arrive and cause a scene.

At least for now, yes. I'm good with that, too. This is a good point to stop, more or less. Because there is no real good point to stop at all after this. I mean, the home visit, Kaede's call, Misaki coming over, Day 3 in the morning... where to draw the line if not here. Sure, I want all that...

Mahiro emanating more feminine charm than Mihari herself who's lacking in that deparment... guess it finally wrecked her.

Mhh, naruhodo... (mumbling while reading)

Weeeeell, you're right. But they are kinda dumb in a different way. In class the place next to Sou might be the best, since you can talk during lessons while the other two would sit in front. They'd have to show him their backsides with few chances to interact with him. But here? This is not...

So we have one chapter left until you take a break. Thinking again, the ideal stopping point would be after the bathroom meeting with Yuri is actually over. I know, Chapter 119 is about the guards, but 120 will move back to Yuri and Sou - it's when he extracts some info on Miku from her. But I...

One thing I noticed while reading the chapter- forgot to mention it: You made Yuri's bow on page 4 significantly too dark. When you set the reader to single page view and then flip through pages 3 to 5 it's really noticable and feels a bit weird.

Yeah, I know... and I didn't mean it in a negative way. For this scene, it's appropriate if Yuri looks a bit more sinister. I really like those evil eyes of hers.

Sou: I WANT YOU! Yuri: ERROR [0xA: IRQL_not_less_or_equal] Yuri looks a bit unwell in this chapter due to the dark shadows.. but yeah, Sou's comment could have legitimately come from me. Somehow I want to hug this prickly little critter (at least for now she still is). Thanks for deciding to...

In a setting between commoners or with someone of the same rank, Akira could bluntly brush it off with a harsh reply like "Fine by me... I came here for business, not to play house". Thing is, this is an official meeting between a local ruler and royals. Akira, as Medis vassal, is not in a...