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looking at Sumire's smiling face while getting her cheeks pinched... enhanced masochism, maybe?

Obviously... Pretty much spot on, I would say. But I admit that was hard to miss... also clear how his family would react if their precious man makes a detour with three harlots (proven during home visit the day before)... Not sure about the bushes, but you bet they will be there... I mean...

I'm not sure it's actually Sou saying that... normally he shouldn't address Sumire with "-sama"... he's usually more or less polite with her but as far as I remember, he says Sumire-nee(-san) or simply Nee-san (maybe Nee-chan for special situations). That said, if it's him saying that, then his...

Regarding "Brunhild", her name originates most likely from https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brynhild ... Thing is, there are various ways to spell that name. It could literally be anything from Brunhild(e) or Brünhild(e) or Brynhildr, if we go with Norse mythology (she's one of the Valkyries)...

Depends on what you apply for :ROFLMAO:

Sou knows the restroom of the old school building but even he can't be that stupid, can he? Not to mention, if he takes his three guards there Yuri will be furious - to sully their special place by bringing three harlots over is a no-go. My educated guess would be him asking the girls (since he...

Suzuki hiding behind the teacher's pult, just lol. I wonder how his way home will turn out, with three super frustrated girls around him - will we see him again ? shiver Meanwhile Sou, well... finally has his guards back and he goes straight for a time sink - the family will be worried sick...

Oh... I thought I had this one my screen a while ago. I have to say the Names weirded me out a bit but oh well. Still, since we got a restart, let me make a small comment on Brunhild's surname: btw. @wallenwhatsit012 It should be "ROSENMÜLLER" - that name is of German origin (like several...

Uhm, actually... [ looks at the last panel ]

Hana: "I fought the cock and the cock won"... But let me warn you, Sou. If you neglect or tease Aya too much, you'll force Miya out... (Aya entering Miku's Zombie-Mode)

Hm, I haven't seen Ruri getting a correction yet. At least I haven't seen something. Well, she was only just introduced in the main series, so there's that, but since she's a named one her time will come - no matter if she wants it or not. Though, I'm not sure if or how much the Indonesian...

Hai, wakatta. No worries. My first post (and even this one in parts) may come across like nitpicking, but I believe pointing out things I noticed is the appropriate thing to do if I'm going to give feedback. I look at your work and tell you my impressions and give my opinion. I do that because I...

So Yuri and her splits on the cover? Well, it was about time. May they have lots of se... ehm fun.

Okay... first the bad things. Your English could use some polish. Don't get me wrong here, it's definitely readable but you tend to leave out words at times, there are several typos and some parts should be rephrased a bit to make them sound better or more natural. If you struggle with that...

Going by that, Momozono Yuri should have peach colored hair... but Kisa changed it later, because peach did not fit her. It could be the same for 真白 麻莉亜 (Mashiro Maria). But yes, I also thought she should have silver/white hair and maybe even red eyes. If she is blonde, then I would assume she's...

Same result - I can open the page - it's slow as hell. I do see the EP1 "Good Morning, Onee-chan" listed. I can click on that but afterwards I get a black overlay, so maybe my local provider hates niconico. Tried VPN, same result - only page is even slower. Well, can't do shit about that right...

So you went from a pale (nearly white) to golden blonde? Well, it might be easier to make her radiate :D I noticed you forgot to color a small triangle of background - near Maria's hands, between the furniture in the back and her skirt. EDIT: Is there an official color version of Maria? Just...

Yuri in her Datenshi Version... my personal taste leaks out, huh? Okay, seriously - if I had 3D modelling skills then I would try creating Sumire - Dual Batons Student Guard Cosplay.

Hana forshadowed there's someone from class D who might be helpful or can be useful against Ruri. Precisely their rank #2, so i would bet it's a member of the Class D guard team. But her being cute doesn't say much - are there even uncute girls? 👀

Indeed. Shows that emotions can overpower even calculating minds like hers. Thing is, she already screwed up big time by rushing it. No matter what she does, the result is likely worse. If she stops herself it would increase his confusion. If she kisses him in that state then all the more. He's...