Oh... I thought I had this one my screen a while ago.
I have to say the Names weirded me out a bit but oh well.
Still, since we got a restart, let me make a small comment on Brunhild's surname:
btw.
@wallenwhatsit012
It should be "ROSENMÜLLER" - that name is of German origin (like several others in this story) and "MÜLLER" (in English "Miller") is always written with a double L. So, unless the one on page 10 was just a typo, I'd suggest you adjust her surname for the future.
Thanks for listening - and for picking this up.