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it's fine for a first draft since the goal is to finish. but for a second draft onwards there are areas to improve. 1. there is quite a bit of redundancy. sometimes you narrate things you've already implied. 2. the structure of a sentence is a reflection of the narration. please read what you...

both the girl and the MC are trash. i think the spin here is making the girl very accepting of a guy's flaws. but this is exaggerated to the point where she's enabling incompetence. worse is that i think there are guys who would be happy in that situation. either guys are so horny they're...

If I recall correctly from the web novels, there were some bumps here and there. But she's not a bad gal. Actually, I was hoping she'd end up in Satou's harem at some point. I don't know if it happens since I stopped reading the WN TL.

i mean... mom's not wrong here...

remember, girls like this don't exist in real life if they did, they wouldn't do this for you big kusa, m i rite?

this series is like "a tsundere in real life would be a pain to deal with" but applied to the brat archetype basically a deconstruction a girl who harasses you because she doesn't know how to express her feelings is no less stupid than a boy who picks on a girl because he likes her it's...

YOU USELESS GODDESSES. YOU HAD ONE JOB. ONE. JOB.

Sometimes the hit die look jarring. It's not like we see the fighter orc's hit points and DR. Are we going to complain when someone lands a 20 and-- as a result-- pull off bullshit?

@TimeVolt - yeah, she's one of the gods, and he's her personal interest rather than group interest As for the definition of "simp": it used to mean "Suckers Idolizing Mediocre P*ssy" and was used when men did absolutely anything to get a little attention from a woman; specifically, when he...

@TimeVolt - not the gods, just the shadow-loli Shadow-loli was using one-horned as a mount thing because it seemed strong. Since MC had a superior monster form thing, he drew shadow-loli's interest

"Thighs of women in uniform are the best" Yes, that man was truly a sage.

If we can see ab and breast shape through clothing, then why don't we see lower body shapes? 🤔

Used to be a Sage and a Hero and now wants to be a normal adventurer. That's fine, except he's an idiot. I mean, he doesn't seem good with finances despite going through adulthood twice. And he should be reincarnating into the same world so he should have some sense about what is "normal" and...

Zepar lookin fine in that swimsuit, too. As expected of a demon

@Owyn It's clear that the arrangement is to coerce her into prostitution. Sure, maybe she'd get 200g/night, but how much of that will go to the kids when the people who set this up want her to keep selling herself? Presuming the Vipers would be acting on good faith is incorrect. In fact, not...

give her a ring pop pls ring pop ending best ending

BLACK SPERM! Garou is badass and all, but some of the Monster Association's top brass are pretty cool too.

FANG!

Flashy, I think. Shorter hair now.

For those of you who are unsure of how to react, this story is basically about an OP harem protagonist who is obsessed with being a secret final boss-type of character. He purposefully enacts chuuni-like scenarios while disguised, all of which turn out to be true. It's f*ckin' hilarious, I...