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  1. randalthor20001

    Eroi Koto Suru Tame ni Kyonyuu Bishoujo Dorei wo Katta Hazu ga, Oshishou-sama to Shitawa Rete Omotta Toori ni Ikanaku Naru Hanashi - Vol. 5 Ch. 21 - …

    Dating a Lovecraftian creature would be a goldmine for interesting plots. You could have it start out where the main character (and the audience) doesn't know that the love interest is a monster. Make it seem like the MC might be crazy at first. Have the monster "help" the MC with their false...
  2. randalthor20001

    Eroi Koto Suru Tame ni Kyonyuu Bishoujo Dorei wo Katta Hazu ga, Oshishou-sama to Shitawa Rete Omotta Toori ni Ikanaku Naru Hanashi - Vol. 5 Ch. 21 - …

    Hear, hear! I would love to see a girls' love story where the MC is a literal fairy. A tiny flying magical creature. And then have the main love interest be a normal sized girl. A large part of the story could be about them overcoming the physical size difference between them. I would also like...
  3. randalthor20001

    Eroi Koto Suru Tame ni Kyonyuu Bishoujo Dorei wo Katta Hazu ga, Oshishou-sama to Shitawa Rete Omotta Toori ni Ikanaku Naru Hanashi - Vol. 5 Ch. 21 - …

    Everyone has things they look good in or bad in. Everyone. The trick is to let them know that certain styles look bad, before they wear them in front of you. That way, you're not insulting them or hurting their feelings. Like preventing bad endings before they happen. And if they do end up still...
  4. randalthor20001

    Eroi Koto Suru Tame ni Kyonyuu Bishoujo Dorei wo Katta Hazu ga, Oshishou-sama to Shitawa Rete Omotta Toori ni Ikanaku Naru Hanashi - Vol. 5 Ch. 21 - …

    Return those glasses right now. Shiina-chan looks less good with them on. Story wise, it makes perfect sense though. They make her look bookish and not intimidating. But I'm disappointed. I was hoping for more of a cute girly look from her.
  5. randalthor20001

    Yurigami-sama no Iutoori! - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    I love how sloppily the Shinigami filled out that form. "Don't worry about it." "Almost died, but managed to miraculously stay alive. Happens all the time. Trust me." There's a 100% chance the Shinigami is going to get caught in the future, and then we'll get to meet her boss or some meddling...
  6. randalthor20001

    Sakisome Complex - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - A Devil Tinged in Lilac

    The loli didn't just write insults in big letters on Rika's notes. There were also several parts where she had crossed out. That implies that she was pointing out the parts Rika had wrong in her notes. So there are only two possible explanations for how a grade schooler is able to correct the...
  7. randalthor20001

    Sakisome Complex - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - A Devil Tinged in Lilac

    "Just please don't leave me." The way the repeating letter E in "me" filled the bottom of that text box was superb. I laughed pretty hard, and was also impressed at the creativity.
  8. randalthor20001

    Sora-kun ga Ashinaga Oneechan-tachi to Ichaicha Suru Hon - Oneshot

    What manga is this based off of? They keep calling each other "comrade". Are they all communists? Did the original Japanese raw use the word comrade, or did the translator erase over whatever original word was used, to insert their "joke" word or to reference their political preference? There...
  9. randalthor20001

    Danshi Kokoseidakedo Gyaru ni TS Shimashita - Vol. 2 Ch. 17.1

    Fingers crossed that you are right. Authors have done it before. Male character instantly becomes attracted to men after becoming a woman. Or far worse, the guy who just transformed into a woman, gets raped by a guy. And then "falls in love" with her rapist. Really enrages me when I encounter...
  10. randalthor20001

    Danshi Kokoseidakedo Gyaru ni TS Shimashita - Vol. 2 Ch. 17.1

    I don't want to see the main character get pregnant; nor do I want to see her date a guy. I prefer male swapped to female characters to experience yuri. If there's no yuri, then I'll settle for ecchi, with no males involved. If I can't have that, then I'll settle for comedy stemming from the...
  11. randalthor20001

    20-Nen de Iroiro Kawacchatta Hero to Shounen - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

    Who is the real Sir Bravely, and why hasn't Kento told him about the other Sir Bravely? It would be real interesting if the other Sir Bravely, that looks just like the original, is the real one. And if the girl Sir Bravely, is a copy. Would make for some interesting identity crisis and...
  12. randalthor20001

    Girl Friends - Vol. 5 Ch. 35

    It was a somewhat good read, but I have complaints. The first third of the series run was great; full of fun and humor. Seeing cute girls being friends, doing silly things, and shy awkward feelings slowly starting to build. Then we started having angst and misunderstandings. And lots of it. I...
  13. randalthor20001

    Girl Friends - Vol. 4 Ch. 22

    I hate it when there is a pivotal emotional scene in a manga, and then the manga just jumps ahead to the next day. Did Akiko and Mari teleport from the karaoke place to their respective homes, as soon as they finished their kiss? I was waiting the entire chapter for a flashback to the immediate...
  14. randalthor20001

    Girl Friends - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

    "Only the cutest girls can look good with short hair." That's because all women look worse with short hair. So if you take an extremely cute looking girl with long hair, and cut it short, she becomes just a somewhat cute girl. Women with short hair, look less feminine. That hairdresser had an...
  15. randalthor20001

    Gokumama ~Gokudou Datta Ore ga Mama ni Natta Hanashi~ - Ch. 15

    There are numerous grammatical errors: "He has a friends, go and find them now." If there are two friends, then the 'a' should be removed. "and you used this to stop him in his track?" It should be 'tracks', not 'track'. Tracks should always plural in that phrase. "Honestly, I can't even...
  16. randalthor20001

    Gokumama ~Gokudou Datta Ore ga Mama ni Natta Hanashi~ - Ch. 14

    Immediately after the take down of the thief, I thought that Nagisa was also a reincarnated male Yakuza. But her being a detective instead, is delicious. A detective is a Yakuza's natural born enemy. I'm hoping we'll get to see lots of scenes with Chinatsu sweating and freaking out over the...
  17. randalthor20001

    Oji Tensei ~Akuyaku Reijou no Kareinaru Seikatsu~ - Vol. 2 Ch. 7 - The Only Thing I Can Trust Is Shiny Oil

    I think Herkimer is the one that is behind the video game being made about her character. He is the one that framed Chloe for treason and got her executed in her past life. He is probably in the real world too. That women that came to Chloe in prison is either the female coworker or the boss...
  18. randalthor20001

    Please Bully Me, Miss Villainess! - Vol. 7 Ch. 104 - Approval

    I really like that Elsa is going to try and earn Yvonne's dad's approval. Earn. Fantastic. Other authors, writing a similar story with lesbians trying to get approval from parents, would just call the dad homophobic or a bigot. Then the story would show how stupid and evil he is. Then humiliate...
  19. randalthor20001

    Please Bully Me, Miss Villainess! - Vol. 7 Ch. 101 - Two Daughters

    Props to the author for how they wrote the father in this chapter. The vast (and I mean overwhelming) majority of other authors, would just make the father a two dimensional bad guy, with negative opinions about lesbians. A punching bag for the main characters to lecture and berate; after he...
  20. randalthor20001

    Qǐng Qīfu Wǒ ba, Èyì Xiǎojiě! - Vol. 7 Ch. 95 - On the Same Page

    Functionally for the character Yvonne, in universe, the glasses would improve her quality of life. From my selfish perspective as a reader, I really don't want to see her in glasses Yvonne looks far less attractive in glasses. Huge downgrade. I hope we don't see her in them ever again; or at...
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