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Not bad but grammar needs work. A lot of little errors here and there and some awkward sentences.

What's turning me off to this series is the really sloppy editing. The whole thing was distracting to read. I know some folks don't know how to properly divide words onto the next line using hyphens (and it's happening here), but arbitrarily separating them and leaving just 1 character on the...

Pg.06 The current heroes doesn't don't have the power to defeat the beast king Pg.23 Im I'm gonna fly at full speed Punctuation needs work. Periods exist, you know? It's hard to tell when sentences end with how you split up the dialogue to fill the bubbles.

Damn, that face is terrifying.

And that shouldn't be a surprise either. Age gaps were just as common, like back then they were expected to push out babies by 15.

Why the surprise? There was that one girl who got married at 12 lol. This is what the time period was like, gotta brush up on history. 🧐

Seems like the kind of scientist obsessed with kaiju and her research.

I hope a different group picks this up then because this current group is pretty bad.

The crying boy is himself, he thought they were alike.

At this point, just do it and get it over with. The plot is going in circles.

I want to see them eat ice cream really fast and get double the brain freeze. :sneaky:

Dude should just dump his family and retire to Aiteria.

Maybe I'm missing something but the premise doesn't make sense to me. Why go to the trouble of having the MC be exiled from 100 groups only to send him back to check on progress and force him to redo it all? Why not just have him assist in saving those worlds the first time around? :questionblob:

Is it though? Because the line doesn't make sense if it was Kanaeno, either that or it was just awkward wording. Based on the context, Harubaru senses something is off after striking her in the midsection. Since the thought bubble is coming from his disembodied eye, it should indicate that the...

Translation error. Not "Inside my stomach", it's "Inside HER stomach."

Apart =/= A part

I honestly thought Dr. Centipede was a guy and it was a misgendering mistake by the translator.

Beggars can't be choosers, right? Her words back when she was first introduced and she was neither neglected or impoverished before she ended up where she's at.

Considering how self-centered and apathetic she is to others, I don't feel sorry for her at all.

It won't end until everyone gets a dramatic slash.