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Proofread please. I don't understand how people routinely release stuff like this without someone dropping it in a discord and asking someone to go through it a couple times. If this IS the proofread edition you need to send it to different people. I've read much worse, but the fact that it's...

Oh gosh, oh no. Total strangers I've never met, in the zombie apocalypse, are being murdered. People who write like this don't understand actual human beings. They just watch TV and read generic stories. Like when the Final Girl drops the knife after stabbing the bad guy once in the armpit.

Hurr durr! I'm the enemy leader! Guess I'll literally instigate the strongest person ever to come kill me! Haw haw all according to plan! God this shit has such trash writing.

So I need people who draw guns in their work to understand it is EXTREMELY threatening to aim a firearm at people. Like it's enough to get you shot on principle. Low ready is a thing.

I mean it was obvious this was going to happen. I just figured they'd drop him off at the gathering point they mentioned being run by the cop.

Are Chinese people crazy or something? World ends, 70% of population are literal zombies. Your first though is "Man, I need to go fuck my business rivals shit all up." It's one thing if you're doing some nasty crazy shit to survive, it's a whole different thing to be out for petty revenge.

Bro come TF on. Trash writing is when you make your cast of good guys STUPID to facilitate the BAD GUYS winning, vs just making smart villains. Basic knowledge tells us that in ANY survival situation your biggest threat is other people. They already ran into a bunch of idiots who's first thought...

I'd be mad the author wrote in a rape/kidnap plot a few days after the world ends.. But honestly there are people this stupid.

At what point do you realize it's YOU that's the issue? Damn. Every town, every time. Yajin is the type of dude your mom tells you to stay away from because he attracts trouble.

It's as old as Kung Foo movies being altered for western release. It's as old as the time you watched Pokémon and wondered why they were calling a rice ball a donut.

Jennis is stupid and way too impulsive. Like any asshole he projects ONLY his values and needs on others. Basically all he's done since he got there was feed them and has now decided he can do whatever he wants with them. No one cares about your child like judgements of humanity. You've had...

Is he stupid or just pretending? That old man stood next to him and said "I will have to kill my best friend of 20 years because we have no money to buy that food to feed our people." I guess murdering the people who risked life and limb to transport food to you, while they slept, no less, isn't...

Kinda confused. Clearly Jennis is supposed to be the arrogant anti hero type hero. Not sure if this over the top portrayal is the writers take on that, which is warped, or if they really believe this is the type of character people really identify with. From a readers perspective MY MC is just...

This is typical corporate thinking but from an incompetent Evil Corp. You're not high enough level to know, but you shouldn't talk about it. Also we can't tell you why you can't talk about it. As an aside I'm disappointed you talked about it even though we never told you to talk about it. JFC...

We suddenly discovered a trove of fresh meat! A relief force ran the blockade and left us a ton of fresh meat. We also got leather and metal as well!

I mean you gotta eat, sleep and fuck SOMEWHERE. People only tolerate overt cruelty soo much. The majority of your soldiers are going to be common people, not nobility, and given the seasonal nature of war you're going to have seasoned soldiers in places like this that WILL burn your shit down.

Idiot. There comes a point where a victim becomes willing and just as culpable as the perp.

You had ONE job.

"Oh yeah bro we have the ability to totally upset the balance of power in any Kingdom! But damn! We don't have a lot of money and influence right now.." Meanwhile the whole world comes together to wipe you out the moment they find out you have the ability to anihilate whole towns. Great job...

He didn't care about saving the old lady. He only saved her long enough to stall the countdown so the Edgy Teen WOULDN'T get the kill and live. Notice only 5 people lived, and he only gave a grasshopper to the kid and killed two himself. He never went back and gave his coworker one and he didn't...